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Mike_Baca2yrCommentedCh 285 Guild War Declared- Mike_Baca2yrCommentedCh 1833 Poison Blade
- Mike_Baca2yrCommentedCh 1828 Scorcese Valley II Â
- Mike_Baca2yrCommentedCh 1810 Equation Puzzle Â
- Mike_Baca2yrCommentedCh 376 It's not Him
- Mike_Baca2yrCommented
That is one of the best things I could have ever heard from an artist (author). The way you stood up for yourself and even stated that there's room for improvement makes me want to follow you even more. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
PS: If it's possible please restrain from using words like stupid or idiot, believe it or not, I read almost all of your comments I dont mind critique, but hateful comments only discourage me from making better content. Thank you. - Mike_Baca2yrCommentedCh 23 Pseudo-demi-god
- Mike_Baca2yrReplied to Novel_detective
I think the bigger problem isn't 5%, but the fact he doesn't notice the difference. Hello, he checks his stats repeatedly and STILL doesn't see that he isn't 100% human anymore.
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this is really a great story. It's a little slow moving but it doesn't seem boring. The seemingly simple and random things like people being in disguise and "lost spells" keep the reader immersed in the novel just to see where these seemingly random details become an important part of the story.
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- Mike_Baca2yrCommentedCh 10 Ashigaru
- Mike_Baca2yrCommentedAlthough young Hugo's mouth twitched noticeably at the rude remark by the 'childish brat', his mind was now encased by a sense of joy that slowly translated itself into a smile on little Hugo's face. The smile was endearing and so kawaii.
- Mike_Baca2yrCommentedCh 9 Daimyos
- Mike_Baca2yrCommented
of course they can they are fe-MALES
Moreover, Zhang Che didn't have the relevant tools at hand. It would be even tougher to start a fire now, perhaps as difficult as getting a rooster to lay eggs, or a man giving birth to a baby. - Mike_Baca2yrCommented
Finally! A character that isn't a perfect "empty canvas." Not a funny situation but the struggle to advance is more realistic: malnutrition and missing teeth make the character more endearing. You want him to get better right away because of his health issues.
Yellow crooked and missing teeth showed that Willy had a vitamin D deficiency which explained why Arthur could feel his knees protesting in pain every time he walked around his new home. - Mike_Baca2yrPosted
I was hesitant at 1st starting a new story from the same genre, however the way the Author combined science, cultivation, space and transmigration to create a refreshing take on an action novel took me by surprise. The fact that the MC is previously "God like" in superiority gets translated to a "MORAL FLEXIBILITY" that leaves the reader wondering if he's a White Hat or Black Hat.