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TheSnap

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2020-06-02 JoinedUnited States
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap9h
    Posted

    Contradicts itself. Chapter length and word choice scream ChatGPT

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    Hozuki King
    Anime & Comics · Greenpart101
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap14d
    Commented

    I guess see the character grow up a little. People who aren’t happy tend to either really want to be happy or reject happiness, not the wierd sort of both at once he has goin on

    Ch 29 question
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    Danmachi: The Black Hole
    Anime & Comics · Develish_Beta
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap22d
    Commented

    Almost perfect

    "Based on de-"
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    RWBY : jaune's gacha
    Anime & Comics · Nemo_2837
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap22d
    Replied to Phantom_Voyage

    Yep that fits

    The Three Palaces.
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    Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
    Video Games · Phantom_Voyage
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap27d
    Replied to TheSnap

    Addendum: looks like it was fixed. Keep up the good work.

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    RWBY : Ruby's Second chance
    Anime & Comics · Nemo_2837
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap29d
    Posted

    I really like this. I don’t usually do reviews but I’m doin this because I think you may accidentally be posting chapters for a different story on this one. Just saying cause I was reading the latest chapters and got very very confused.

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    RWBY : Ruby's Second chance
    Anime & Comics · Nemo_2837
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap30d
    Commented

    Ryuu

    Ch 16 ship vote
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    Danmachi: The Black Hole
    Anime & Comics · Develish_Beta
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap1mth
    Replied to DuchessKolslaw

    Blood traitor as in sold out active family members in their lifetime

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Potter's luck
    Book&Literature · FanFictionForge
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap1mth
    Commented

    This is pretty good. Only a few major flaws but only on things with synonyms so I understood what was meant

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Potter's luck
    Book&Literature · FanFictionForge
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap2mth
    Commented

    Indeed

    The first being, only planning out like the initial 15 chapters, and then freestyling from there. Very bad idea, but fuck it, we ball.
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    Marvel: The Huntsman Caught In a Spider's Web
    Anime & Comics · spiderkayden
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap2mth
    Commented

    What

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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap2mth
    Commented

    “I can’t see the end of the horiz- HATSUNE MIKU!” Hatsune Miku walks around corner with shotgun

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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap2mth
    Commented

    Weakness to refrigerators?

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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap3mth
    Commented

    Comedy has four tenets -subversion -clarity (dad jokes) -the one we don’t talk about -ironic racism

    [A/N: Although I'm not racist, I enjoy writing racist content for entertainment.]
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    Marvel: At the start, I married Aunt May and activated the System
    Anime & Comics · Cruel_Death
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap4mth
    Commented

    Did chapter 5 fail to upload?

    Ch 6 Chapter Six
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    KonoSuba: Crimson Eyed Devils
    Anime & Comics · Nick_Kicker
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap4mth
    Posted

    I used to play this game a lot. Seeing it as a basis for fanfiction was like a nostalgic gut punch. Holy crap

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    Blox Fruits: Blood Shorks
    Anime & Comics · LSen
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap5mth
    Commented

    I see what you did there

    [Well let's look around to see if we can find anything. Because I've been lost myself and I want to go back home and watch more trials of Osiris. But now that I have a guardian. I can put your name into the trials. UMU] IM BACK IN THE FUCKING BUILDING AGAIN.
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    Is it wrong for a guardian to find exotics in a dungeon?
    Anime & Comics · Guardian_of_Emiya
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap5mth
    Commented

    Oh no, my one weakness, a well constructed object

    Temari was horrified, that attack was the only Jutsu in her arsenal. She didn't bother learning anything else since everybody she had fought always goes down when she uses that Jutsu once.
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    Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage
    Anime & Comics · some_writer
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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap6mth
    Posted

    Seems good. It isn’t unreadable, which is always what defines the quality of a translated fic for me, but there is still a lot of roughness in need of editing.

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  • TheSnap
    TheSnap6mth
    Replied to aleix_lorca

    People just don’t seem to review anymore

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    One Piece: Second Chance
    Anime & Comics · pOtOtO53
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