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Honestly, it's not terrible for a first work. I can see where the author was trying to go. however, I believe too many elements were thrown in at once, rather than gradually added. I believe the author could do well in the future so long as they have a clearer idea of what it is they wish to right and a proper flow into their work.
I'd be okay with that setting, somewhat of an open relationship but nothing permanent. MAYBE bigamy (MC plus 2 others) since it's somewhat kinda realistic in actual poly amorous relationships (from what a friend and her two partners tell me) but nothing more than that.
bwahaha I must accept defeat to the young master Indeed
out of all my witty comments I'm surprised this is my number one liked comment đ đ thank yall!
having a difficult time figuring out who is who, the pronouns shift often and confuses the gender. overall it's a great story keep up the good work