I can proofread. Let me help you (",) just send me a mail.

Hey Helen it's me. if you need me to proofread your story let me know. I will correct the errors I find.

Very well written. The imagery is poignant. i started reading it last year but still remember MC's personality. Will finish reading for sure. There are a few mistakes here and there but the story flows very well. There aren't many chapters but that is fine by me.