It is a beautiful family story; one that can be read together with a kid that is younger than a teen! Social media, movies and TV shows are too risqué or violent nowadays! TY! We are loving it!

Synopsis is very similar to a few stories that has been written; however, the twist to change the script is delightful. i would give a higher mark, if it was an original.

The suspense whether or not Chu Wuyou can join her son before her husband finds out about their divorce is exciting! Love it!

Plot too slow - you'll lose readers.

Father will soon learn of his twin kids.

Too slow, unnecessary paragraph!

Waiting for Aria to be awaken/understand her feelings towards Alan.

if I'm Aria, I'd replace the Principal, who is easily persuaded with money for the school. stupido@

Love is in the air!

Eva's personality match her age group; not Aria!

I think Alan would looked great in a plain white t-shirt. Alan was very cunning with his 1st date!

You are using the wrong pronoun. he or his for a male; she or her for a girl. I noticed it a lot with Asian culture.

Jade Reed is falling in love with Aria. Alan competition or will it be Isaac?

No brotherly competition for Aria now; but how about in the future?

Sadly, her beloved parents are deceased. She needed her Dad for the unjustifiable accusation of her teacher!

The intro is simple and direct - can't wait to see how she will get her justice.

Americans has problem retaining names of characters, pls use easier 1st names!

Puppy love!

in real life men, especially young men, are slaves to any cute female. Reason so many men losses their families due an affair!!! Only the ones with morals and self worth wins against the female tigress!

Tee...hee...hee! College atmosphere, fun! How old is he?