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Update. Anyone who is reading this I missed two chapters as I was posting. So registered and registered part two will be longer than usual because I had 3 chapters called register, registered part two and registered. So I skipped the chapters in the middle. I apologize for the inconvenience. If you have to go back and read them I sincerely apologize and hope that since it being free will make up for it. Also once I get time I will go back and fix all the mistakes that were auto corrected. I dont get paid for posting on her so I will use my free time to try to updat any mistakes
Anyone that is trying to read this please go to my other book with the same name. somehow I ended up with two books and just stuck with it but this is the unedited and unfinished version. The other one is finished and it is edited so if youāve read some of it before you will have to start over because a few major things changed. sorry for the inconvenience and I hope you give it a try since itās free
Please give my book a try and a review. It will be free for the time being to let people get a chance to see if they like it. It is not a typical book and I hope since itās free a few people will actually read the whole thing and enjoy it. I will be posting dozens of chapters in the next few days. My other book the Goddess of wisdom and creation is not the actual final copy. The final copy is on good novel and costs money. If this book gets enough people to enjoy it I will revise the draft of my other book to have on here so people can read it.
I am not going to lie I stopped reading at 130 and skipped to the end because I did not like the li character. He reminded me of a second character from a different book that I read. He was too much and it was impossible to read. This story was too sad and I honestly canāt stomach reading it because the main male character did not reel me in. The ending with pei was sad and made me wish that he was not abusive and that she ended with him because once you take away the abuse he was the kind of man I liked in books.
I enjoy this book and think that maybe itās not for people who have been abused. itās entertaining.
He seen something that his Xia ling did and now he heard her name. Hmmm
She definitely switched the number it seems like. I trust no one until the middle.
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I was thinking that too. Hahah she though magical beans, I though animals. Maybe heā a fury s
This is the author I don't want anybody to be confused so the most important thing to know is that the main character is telling her story besides the scenes that are not with her. but she talks to herself alot. Alot of it is her thoughts .She's emotionally all over the place at times so she is always in her mind. I wanted you to see what she went through and what she thought. The beginning isn't as eventful as further on. This is a love and war book. It's going to be a journey and I really hope everyone at least gives it a try.
I want everyone to know that this book has alot of manipulation in it. so If at times it seems like there's a plot problem there isn't. Mazaya alters memories alot as you can see but I can assure you that all flash backs are real and all scenes are also. If someone brings up a memory it may or may not be real. only time will tell. So if a flashback comes up contradicting a memory that mean that memory was altered. I hope everyone enjoys. Just alittle hint to help you enjoy the book more
There is no plot problems I want everyone to remember that flashbacks are the only for sure thing besides the actual scenes that are being read. If someone mentions a memory it may not be real. but if a flashback happens it is. šššššš I hope you enjoy
I know everyone is wondering about some of the storyline possibly. I'll give this one detail. Any memory that is a flashback is real. As you can tell Mazaya tends to change others memories. So as the story goes on it will be more clear. Some of the memories that others were altered to accommodate things. I don't want anyone to think there's a plot problem .Things will be explained soon
I know everyone is wondering about some of the storyline possibly. I'll give this one detail. Any memory that is a flashback is real. As you can tell Mazaya tends to change others memories. So as the story goes on it will be more clear. Some of the memories that others were altered to accommodate things. I don't want anyone to think there's a plot problem .Things will be explained soon
it not hard to understand that she still was super hurt .you can't just get the love back overnight. maybe she does love him .she's giving him what she can and he will accept it. she wanted nothing to do with him but he kept hounding her .she gave in and now she's trying. obviously people can't read or understand her side of view .she lost her love because losing her baby having her dad killed and being left in the dark and being alone for years .
yes you owe them .you better make sure lacy stays away
the baby had a rebirth too š„°š„°š„°š„°