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TooSexy4U2yrReplied to God_Of_HateGood for you. I dont personally like It but can see why people would. đ
Gojo suddenly gained a massive tick mark on his head. "Worthy of being a servant to a spoiled, rotten tomato?" Gojo crossed his fingers and took of his sunglasses "Domain Expansion: Infinite Void" The ORC members suddenly appeared in the dark expanse of space with a black hole in the centre. None of them could move, "It's funny isn't it? When you are given everything you can only do nothing. In here every action needed to live is repeated an infinite amount of times."- TooSexy4U2yrCommented
Ahh yes never a DxD story without Rias bashing đ
Gojo suddenly gained a massive tick mark on his head. "Worthy of being a servant to a spoiled, rotten tomato?" Gojo crossed his fingers and took of his sunglasses "Domain Expansion: Infinite Void" The ORC members suddenly appeared in the dark expanse of space with a black hole in the centre. None of them could move, "It's funny isn't it? When you are given everything you can only do nothing. In here every action needed to live is repeated an infinite amount of times." - TooSexy4U2yrPosted
The sentences Is readable, but the grammar is not superb. I don't know what you expected its fan fiction there's no editors or nothing so i don't really mind the bad grammar. What I do mind however is making the characters OOC to meeting specific agendas for the author. No. The author made relationships with other characters feel forced. This basically follows canon so the world background isn't something to write home about. Anyways good luck writing author, but this wasnât for me.
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Yo do could you explain how a system novel works and how to make one? You seem knowledgable about these things and im new to Webnovel.
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