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my_cookies29dCommentedCh 361 The Sky That Gathers Screams (3)- my_cookies4mthCommentedCh -5 NOTICE
- my_cookies7mthCommentedCh 48 An Emotionless King
- my_cookies9mthPosted
Overall, it's quite good but the pace is a lil bit fast. The grammar is understandable enough but it would be better if the pov is in 3rd person. Try to also make the first letter of a sentence a capital just to its better to read. Story has potential to be good atleast. Keep up the good work author!
- my_cookies9mthCommentedCh 24 Chapter 24: Maids Get(?)
- my_cookies10mthCommented
sona
As I reached the I saw Sora and Tsubasa waiting by the gate making me sigh angrily internally. - my_cookies10mthCommented
imagine hearing that the ruler of the world is just named Carl. The Hidden Ruler, He who sit at the top of the world, Carl the Monarch
The black-haired youth in front of them was Carl, one of the celestial dragons who live inside the Domain of the Gods. Though, unlike the other Celestial Dragons, his identity was way more special. - my_cookies11mthCommented
the only thing I like about sona is her sister
He felt a light pinch from Rias who told him telepathically, [Don't flirt with my best friend.] He ignored her and kept looking at Sona whose face had tints of very prominent red as she realized that he was asking her out on a date. - my_cookies11mthCommented
how I wish I have gudako's luck when playing gacha
This book has been deleted. - my_cookies11mthCommented
fate everytime a servant is fighting: just a gas leak
'...A light? I remember that there was a sudden light and then all I could see was white... Then I woke up here... Was it an explosion? a gas leak?' He hypothesized. - my_cookies11mthCommentedCh 78 Chapter 77: Snake?
- my_cookies11mthCommentedCh 77 Chapter 76
- my_cookies11mthReplied to my_cookiesCh 76 Chapter 75
- my_cookies11mthCommentedCh 76 Chapter 75
- my_cookies1yrReplied to Mobius_5trip
i've butchered a chicken and seen some dead animals yet the first time I saw a dead body I threw up. The cut from the side and some swelling. the smell. its all disgusting that I could never forget it. its that worse. heard some people could handle it pretty well
As it turns out, I was utterly mistaken. No amount of butchered animals would be enough to prepare me for what I did to that poor bastard's corpse. Nothing would have. - my_cookies1yrCommented
heh
"Go back, Shimura Danzo." Hanzo then closed his eyes, "A man with ambition, yet no sense of loyalty—the quality of a leader is non-existent in a lowly being such as you." - my_cookies1yrCommentedCh 83 Monke V Angel - 1
- my_cookies1yrCommentedCh 74 Scaring Rimuru and More Politics
- my_cookies1yrCommented
ishiki's plan is possibly imprinting a karma on yuichi to take over his body.
'Soon... Soon I will become even stronger than Shibai ever was' Isshiki thought which made the dangerous glint in his eyes even stronger before leaving his chair as it was finally time for them to move - my_cookies1yrCommented
17 years had passed and he still didn't learn more skills and got more items? such a huge letdown mr. author. I mean it would probably be fine if the he had 3-5 more techniques and any of his former skills are upgraded or his stats are correctly calculated for the time that passed
Skills- Kamehameha(B), Afterimage technique(B), Self-taught martial arts(E)]