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at this point i think dude ( hokage ) just see if it could work and fully expected to just die but not sealed
i think it fine but i believe the mc is getting a bit overshadowed by his child but i understand that hes a god so that is it in my point of view but everyting else is pretty good
time for CHAOS i cast bad hair day i cast flavored water ( works on saliva ) i cast unable to sneeze i cast needing to sneeze i cast weird smell you can't find i cast specking random fact i cast item in shoe i cast hearing a sound effect i cast background music your welcome
just a thought why not the alchemy monster thing ( i forgot what's it called) you know the one with the red stone
id chose blood line since it can't be upgraded by system
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