I think it's fine remember this is dxd over powered is under powered next chapter.

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Good luck in the air force. As a veteran I will give you some pieces of advice. 1. The uniform is everything. Appearance is everything if you look like crud the higher ups will treat you like crud. 2. Fitness is king.. I worked out for an hour a day. If I couldn't the minimum I would do is the pfa standard max to get a higher fit rep 3. Do college in my case it was navy college so no idea what you have available. 4. Do the 401k I was first gen of this program. I set max I could at the time. A forgot about it. I had around 50k in the 10 years I had before my injuries forced me out. It's a good life line. Good luck and clear skies

Im for all 3. Hermione is finally ready and Felicia and Emma can help run the businesses and syndacates he forms.

So if we're going off personalities does that mean deadpool and legion are guilds on their own.

You brought back my ptsd with the hearts and minds at least you didn't say top of the spear rofl

There were at least 3 like that. Personally I would call it the tri-moron competition ( Dumbledore fudge and voldemort) and have them do stupid tasks. Like task be singing competition an assigned muggle song. The only idea I have is fudge has to sing to umbridge baby's got back by sir mixalot. Let it go for voldemort or the sound of silence. Can't think of funny ones for the other 1. Something like a muggle triathlon for the second task to rescue there significant other. Ie umbridge for fudge gellert for Dumbledore and nagini and belletrix for vodemort. 3rd task jeopardy such categories as famous muggles and how the three contestants fail against them like Stalin vs voldemort a darklord fudge vs Churchill as a minister and Einstein as an example vs dumbledore . Famous muggle weapons and wars and their results. Famous muggle pure Blood lines etc. Just make it funny. Hosted by Jack sparrow or my thoughts to mess with everybody each section hosted by the Doctor and his Tardis (each section a different doctor) as a favor to his good friends Jack sparrow and Harry potter. Just some thoughts on how to make it funny.

Anyone else sad because Disney decided to replace Johnny depp as Jack sparrow.

A good start and I like the world and main so far

I agree with some others I don't like this chapter I would rather be depowered everyone than just target the avengers. The illuminati and strange threatened his universe and chickened out. The average people shouldn't be punished because he is angry.

Personally I don't see anything wrong with making changes in a story in a new universe. He could also introduce the idea of fan fiction as well since most of it was birthed from Harry potter and buffy . Speaking of Buffy that and charmed are also messed up.

Just got back on webnovel after a couple of months and I was so happy to see a new novel in this genre. The novel im really a superstar was what got me into these kind of novels. Just like make a wishes Mr black got me into fan fiction after he was introduced in a fanfi c I read here. Do you want to go the worst part the novel getting banned was a bday present. So far an excellent read keep it up. I would suggest he purchase a skill like transfer and like in superstar memory enhancers. Then he could copy over completed images just an idea that way he can do anime manga cartoons so on easier.

True I saved Spanish in high school and now 2 decades later I remember very little

I know your pain take your time. My grandfather helped me out myself back together with his own experience with ptsd from his time in the marines. This bs war on terror really tore me up. When he died the only grandparent I had left was my grandma and my aunt took advantage of her and put her in a home and forbade me to visit. She passed a year later. All you can do is remember them and how they improved your life. Remember her strengths and weaknesses and how she improved your life and what aspects of her made you. Laugh cry scream rage. The part that misses her will never go away but in time the pain will pass and you will look back on the woman that made you who you are and smile and say thank you.

My vote slice of life for a couple of chapters. Ie finish school and taking masteries. Defining who is in his harem and changing their race. Finally I would take a piece out of one of mistofrainbow\mistofshadow's fanfics and use a ritual to create a home base outside of the multiverse warded against scrying ecetra. And a portable mansions with links to the mentioned base that way mc and various groups can travel to different verses and still be together.

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If zero likes music if he had the contacts and where he was at this was the time to see bites and tupac. And since I was a weird white kid that liked both curt cobain nirvana just made it big.

I loved the block buster comment I haven't thought of that place in decades. How ever the start of early internet was roughly 91 to 92 from what I can remember. So it would be a video cassette or laserdisc Betamax just died. Laserdisc were the precursor of DVD but we're the size of lp records. Finally how high came out in 01 so it's a decade to early jim Carrey was just getting popular. I would recommend karate kid or Rad which was a very popular in our age group putting your character at 13 in 91 he is the same age as my sister and born roughly 77. Rad was a bmx movie. we rollerskated, did bmx and skate board. Street ball yes even the non popular kids it's what we did for fun in the pre cell phone internet era.

I like the story as it is. I am so tired of arm chair haters or micro managing wannabe Dumbledores destroying authors drive to create their own stories. It is your story write how you want. As for your English your working on it. Since all I know is bad English and common phrases I learned to move around all over the world while I was in the military my praises to you. I can't function in another language enough to do so but you can write. Keep up the good work.

I say dc then grimm. I would also say games like final fantasy, skyrim and halo. Also star wars star trek there is a lot you can do.