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The protagonist has knowledge about Douluo Dalu, right? So he probably has knowledge about the soul core and the innate secret method of the body sect. He could use these concepts before anyone else. This would give him an overwhelming advantage. Besides the fact that these are concepts from Douluo's own world. (Translate
I understand that he treats everything with care because his "survival" depends on it, but I don't really feel much empathy for Petunia. Harry has to wash, clean, cook and still worry about the feelings of an old woman, while he is only 10 years old. Petunia seems like a spoiled child. I understand that he is doing all this for his own good, but I still hope that I didn't forgive her so easily, or worse, act as if all this didn't happen. He lived 10 of his life living under one, in a house that was left by his mother to his sister, and was still treated like a slave, it's a situation that is not easily forgiven. Vernon is a despicable guy, but he has no direct connection to Harry, now Petunia? She is his aunt, in my opinion it makes her even worse for never having done anything. I hope you handle this in a rational way, author.
I understand that he treats everything with care because his "survival" depends on it, but I don't really feel much empathy for Petunia. Harry has to wash, clean, cook and still worry about the feelings of an old woman, while he is only 10 years old. Petunia seems like a spoiled child. I understand that he is doing all this for his own good, but I still hope that I didn't forgive her so easily, or worse, act as if all this didn't happen. He lived 10 of his life living under one, in a house that was left by his mother to his sister, and was still treated like a slave, it's a situation that is not easily forgiven. Vernon is a despicable guy, but he has no direct connection to Harry, now Petunia? She is his aunt, in my opinion it makes her even worse for never having done anything. I hope you handle this in a rational way, author.
And what about The Mask? That a human should not know about his vampire identity. This is the second guy who discovered this instantly. Another thing, why hasn't his sword skill evolved at all? How well he fights should already be increased beyond intermediate level.
Author, you must have already read a good part of this story. Please answer me if this is the type of story that only revolves around misunderstandings and things like that and has irrational female characters and a protagonist who never reacts. Because if it's like that, I'll do it now and everyone will be happy. (Translate
I hope the story has a harem, but if it doesn't at the very least put Lily along with it. Develop all of this and show that the two clearly like each other so that in the end she doesn't end up with anyone, or even worse she ends up with another character. It definitely leaves a horrible taste in your mouth. (Translate