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Peach_Muncher10

Peach_Muncher10

Lv2

laughing is for the brave.

2020-05-28 JoinedGlobal
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Writing

1.7h

of reading

64

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  • Peach_Muncher10
    Peach_Muncher10a year ago
    Replied to Faux1231

    will the technological advancement ever reach sic fi levels?

  • Peach_Muncher10
    Peach_Muncher102 years ago
    Posted

    great novel, at first I didn't like it because of the grammer issues and how chaotic the whole start was but I came back and gave it another chance, which to say the least, I wasn't disappointed, although the pacing is still fast from time to time. The core and essence of the story is nice and you know how to keep reader's attention while setting up future plot points well. The only thing I can sincerely advice you on after 300+ chaps of reading is pretense. Its just you switch pretenses a quite often, You seem to be good at writing past tense and I sincerely hope you stick with it as it makes your story flow better.

  • Peach_Muncher10
    Peach_Muncher102 years ago
    Posted

    hey author I don't if you'll see this but I really like this story. I like how you're taking your time with this story, especially the character development. sure, leonel has many flaws and is hypocrite through and through but he strives to become better and better. I also like how you are developing aina, you're taking your time with relationship which tells me you value quite a bit compared to other authors who do romance. so please, try not to add harem if possible. as of now I'm at 1000+ and this is my first review ever, it's a beautiful story.