Very good so far. some basic Grammer mistakes with using the wrong words to describe present / past tense actions. I hope the author can keep it up.good job author-san

I thought khalon was bullet proof

the grammar final got better I hope it continues to be good 👍

why did heavenly change to Da luo

currently on chapter 196. overall a good story to kill time. it has the usual problem with names being swapped sometimes. its a faster paced story with alot of time skips. overall not the worst book I've read as long as the grammer stays decent ill hang around a bit longer

Been reading this for awhile currently ch 265. Have to say its not bad. Grammar mistakes are few but they do pop up every now and then. story pace is very even i would say. its not super fast paced but not taking 10 chapters to fight someone either. characters are consistent and don't change how they act they chapter. the world is being filled out more as the book goes along but takes place in one area mosty. Overall it's a book that I read to kill time. As long as the grammar doesn't shit itself then ill stick around for awhile longer

yes fight good