Almond_eyes_69
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I see
Oversee an event the system could manage... Missing punctuation
suddenly, a Golden, floating door... I don't think you need a comma in Golden,< right?
and right now, he did not want to miss this opportunity >>> and right now he didn't want to miss this opportunity
That's great!. Also sorry, I realized that I sounded a bit rude there
Or else me writing here is useless
I hope the author reads comments
Also the choice of the mc is too sudden and a little illogical making it feel forced
"He MUST hire... "I've seen this happening a mile away. Author the plot is too predictable which ruins my experience and everybody else
Again he's not asking
That's not asking
Can we stop the "twitching lip" thing? its getting waaay to repetitive
In your- missing word
Come on mate, it's a joke