Almond_eyes_69
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Almond_eyes_693 years agoReplied to lifesketcherI see
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Oversee an event the system could manage... Missing punctuation
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suddenly, a Golden, floating door... I don't think you need a comma in Golden,< right?
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and right now, he did not want to miss this opportunity >>> and right now he didn't want to miss this opportunity
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That's great!. Also sorry, I realized that I sounded a bit rude there
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Or else me writing here is useless
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I hope the author reads comments
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Also the choice of the mc is too sudden and a little illogical making it feel forced
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