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The first thing that came to my heād was like a small wolf cub trying to boss around the alpha
I like this it well written a has grabbed my attention and this chapter was much needed as though it pains me to say this his mother was only dead weight with his weak strength and also what does he look like does he have only one eye. One tip on your writing even though I as a person suck at writing (my user tag) is that you should try to describe the characters better and any changes that happen to them and other than that I think this is a great story
Simply put people want arcane mage because he already has ultimate wisdom and with those to abilities he would be unstoppable but personally at the moment he needs to get out of the underworld and if he had abilities of a ghost he might be able to and arcane mage seems to predictable and I want something that he has to work for. Donāt get me wrong I will still read this story no matter what you pick.