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Enlighted129minReplied to Ak02- Enlighted11hCommented
The chapter is good the story seems to be rushed I hope you take a chapters slowly to build up story like mc powers u showed pathway but didn’t show the names of pathways and his goals.i like the concept i hope you continue this
This paragraph has been deleted. - Enlighted14hCommentedA disciple who can't grow up and provide benefits to him is of no use to Nathan.
- Enlighted17hCommentedHis body seemed to be made of stars, his step was neither loud nor silent, like that of a disciplined soldier. His gaze was fierce but gentle. More importantly, his entire being screamed off the sword. His aura alone seemed capable of cutting even the highest sky.
- Enlighted18hReplied to Ak02
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I like the story but the elements like luck ,fate,time are being used too commonly and almost every character seems to posses them and I lost interest to read after author started using ChatGPT .the main character seems to always be under conspiracy against him to make him a puppet or kill him the same trope is kinda making story bland
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- Enlighted15dReplied to Enlighted1
This one is from wiki
"Are there any name suggestions for followers of the King in Yellow? I've tried various translations, but I always end up with either 'Yellow Robe Monks' or the 'Yellow Robe Cultivate'." - Enlighted15dCommentedThe significance of the blood seeping through the fabric was unmistakable, marking the severity of the leader's injury. Though narrowly escaping a fatal wound, the visible gash served as a testament to the ferocity of their encounter, a mere prelude to the impending clash of titans.
- Enlighted15dCommentedFor this reason, he had specially trained to kill three people with a single pencil, honing his skills on his peers, and earning the title of "Pencil Killer."
- Enlighted18dCommented"One, two, three… All of them are as dead as stone Buddhas!"
- Enlighted110dCommented
Brotherhood of yellow sign
"Are there any name suggestions for followers of the King in Yellow? I've tried various translations, but I always end up with either 'Yellow Robe Monks' or the 'Yellow Robe Cultivate'." - Enlighted112dCommentedIt's not like the novel would go into detail about the currency in the first place.
- Enlighted113dCommented
Didn’t land of rivers doesn’t have shinobi.am I wrong?
They were patrolling tanigakure shinobi. - Enlighted113dCommented
Is this ChatGPT or the author writing ?
A desperate gamble coursed through Nevaeh's mind. "How strong was aura?" It gnawed at him. Mother's soldiers were formidable, but none wielded this strange power. This unexpected foe presented a unique opportunity – a chance to hone his own abilities. This goblin, then, became a twisted training dummy. Nevaeh attacked relentlessly, probing for weaknesses, creating them when he couldn't find them. In turn, the goblin's aura-coated sword cleaved through his ice defenses, forcing Nevaeh to dodge in a bloody ballet. Sometimes, the blows found their mark, taking limbs and leaving him punctured and bleeding. - Enlighted115dCommented
Finally
A wolf pays no heed to the meaningless opinions of sheep. He alters their perception, and with it, seizes control, reigning supreme over the very creatures who once dared to judge him. - Enlighted115dCommented
Iam starting to dislike mc character
…Okay, fine. I'll stop with my jokes. - Enlighted115dCommented
Is this even worth reading?
I have a whole new world's pop culture to catch up to. And what better way to do that than reading up on some good memes? - Enlighted115dCommentedYoriichi Tsugikuni (Demon Slayer)