I noticed never seems to use his kraken guys

so totally the twins and that's why there was no talk hope Gary uses his new full transformation to f them up hard core

I wanna know his second choice for royal knight and where Erin went she's not listening to bliss and trusting Quinn plus is Quinn gonna talk with Ray again he did have reaction to lamaxius need a mass release 😁🙃

definitely need either a better editor or a second one the book is good for the most part but does feel like author just forgets about plot events and skips forward and the privilege price are the highest ive ever seen and i have at least 10 privileges going at the same time regularly so def needs to lower those

um any body else think brock might be the 1st vampire leader they all looking for im me they did just reveal that he can change his look like Arthur did only Logan's seen him and he would know what he looks like just like everyone else

this should say peak level at this point it is has been at mid level already for quite some time already

ur a great writer and the chapters are well though out we will all be patient and help as much as we can keep up the good work

this chapter repeats it self whole paragraphs

this should be third seal if i didnt miss any thing

yeah sil should have no problem fixing it as long as he took his ability when he grabbed him or he can take pauls and use it at a higher level

amazing story we really love it we need more chapters hope things are going well

great story and well thought out brings good character development with a good background development just need to be continued regularly which we all know his hard at the beginning

hope to see more chapters soon

really love this book but hoping to see little longer chapters soon

so why has no one used the communication masks I mean I know Logan got taken from him but are we saying that both Peters and quinns got destroyed in in the crash because that's weird

ok saw that coming for some reason the build up to it was great starting back to the whole soul ability strengthen techniques great job cant wait for more

See this! I just gifted the story: Ring

we were just worried something happened we all love the book

definitely seems like they are some how merging ppl and instead of all there personalitys mixing they split in 3

so what all things do u guys think had changes made to it ?