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Seriously….. come on author. It has been mentioned several times. Thirty thousand = 30,000 Three hundred thousand = 300,000
Enjoying the novel so far, but I feel like the author’s note and the “dear readers” part at the end of every chapter is just to fill the character limit for the chapter. Paragraphs will also repeat. If I spend coins on your novel, please don’t make me feel like I am getting cheated out of coins/ story. Thanks.
Just a suggestion, but Ethan shouldn’t be asking every female if it feels good. He doesn’t like confidence, so he shouldn’t have to be validated by asking that and it shows he doesn’t have any confidence in bed. Last suggestion, but the pet names seem like something he wouldn’t say or at least make them better than generic ones. Maybe saying, “my dragoness” instead of baby. Anyway, your story and you don’t need me to tell you how you write. Just keep writing chapters and I will be happy. lol
I never review a novel, but by far, this is the best story I have come across. Keep up the good work…and update more. The wait is killing me.