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I think it has been a while since i got so invested in a fanfic of this site(specially a cn translated one), but going to the review(had to upload again cause formatting was sh* bruh): Writing Quality - While i read i hardly found any glaring errors in the grammar so thats a plus, aside from the use of some chinese or directly translated terms such as destiny(schicksal) its overall fine, so a 4. Stability of Updates - Perfect if im being honest. Story development - thats where i give a 3, why? Meanwhile i found the start pretty solid, as she got adopted, went to academy city and made deals with aleister. I could feel an real progression through this period, something i didnt feel in subsequent chapters that had misaka, kuroko, and the railgun gang, the story chapters became more like an slice of life than anything, and i dont say its bad per se, but i would be grateful if it was for an later major plot point involving those characters and how they were built in these chapters. Anyway, the story picked up its pace in the recent chapter as im writing this(94) so its overall fine. Character Design - I really... dont have an impression of this one? since its fanfic we have the original designs and such, only selene and ocs author made really need an description but i dont have much of an impression(again) from them aside of selene. (4 stars still) World Background - Its Toaru so eh 5 stars

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter! And Yeah Time skip!

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

thanks for the chapter!