Again..you have me reading through these words so fast to see what happens next..great writing..

Just great writing. have me reading more...

wow that was really good I really like the part with her eyes that got me it was I was not expecting that that was really good.

oh okay getting good now

again you got me intrigued to keep reading more

okay off to a great start .. you have me reading more...

See this! I just gifted the story: Sword