Travis_Rasnick

darn ittttt WE DEMAN FEAR BE INSTILLED INTO THE WEAK!!! lol

faswite isnt that the stuff they make synthetic mana out of.

Your doing an excellent job with your writtings. No need to fill rushed its like a build up to what we all know is comming Then when it finnialy gets here its gonna be a bang. Sadly ive read other books on here and one author in peticular over dose it with details to fill his word quantity.

The storys very good so far eve. The world building you describe is very nice as ussal. Hint of just plain advice I really dont think you need it tho. Just always remmember never go to far in depth then it starts to fill like an instructional booklet.

heh guessing the term QUEEN BEE is gonna come true possibly.

THE NINTH RANK!!! CURIOUS CURIOUS I SAY!!!!

THE MAD DOCTOR IS IN! nurse night scalpel! assistant snore foucus a beam here here anddd here. PLANT GET BACK IN THERE I DIDNT SAY YOU COULD COME OUT!!! demonic sword cut from here to here. no wait he.....oh to late.

I TOLD YOU!!

lots of challenges there if you know what i mean.

Nah she probaly one of the beast form type hybrids. So she either has an item to help hide her in humanoid form or she has a rare ability to transform at will.