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I am not the author, so I do not know what will happen next, but as a reader I have such a feeling.

The whole plot is how she eats and that's it. I'm bored, although the concept is interesting, but it doesn't even have a potential opponent. Everyone does not even suspect that it exists, but it was possible to make a detective showing a potential opponent that they know something and that they are taking action. If it continues to be like this, it's just Mary Sue.

she has no rank or even citizenship of Konoha, what will she do there?

where is Konan?

I think you can create your character long before the main plot.

Overlord?

This is spam.

Please finish at least one short story.

The author is good at writing novels, but what is their meaning if they have no end? Despite the popularity of the written. I didn't even start reading this novel because I know the author will not finish this novel.

Your comment is funny, the main problem is copying. The protagonist of this fanfiction plays a huge role, but this one is not shown. Only one of the problems, and there are many of them. I'm too lazy to list them, for example, there is no general relationship between the characters. They are like a puppet show. Don't criticize because he's one of a kind ... It's stupid.

Ye Ziyun is the best thing in the novel.

I was killed by the lack of TatsuyaXYe Ziyun

Other Name of Fanti - "Nie Li and his servants" Beginning good but, I do not like the main hero of the servant [img=faceslap] half of the fanfiction is copy paste and the relationship between the characters is not disclosed.