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I really appreciate the story so far. The relationships feel natural and power progression of characters are entertaining but not campy. Here's to a bright future to the wedded couple and the continuation of this great work.
Hey there, hope you are doing well. I believe emphasize here should be empathize.
Lemme guess. He still needs to accept his humanity, right? Even before he started showing signs of being a beast, he viewed himself as a monster in a human world.
Good chapter. Small side note, the word you used here "wander" should be "wonder." I love the word wander it is fun to use in conversation but it means to walk aimlessly so I rarely get to use it.
Excellent chapter. If I might hazard a guess for the future, the MC's ability to absorb souls and utilize them will prove above average and it is all thanks to the forging of his own soul in the long dark he endured before reaching the city. He knows who and what he is, or at least the most pure bits left. side note: In this chapter you used the phrase "veil swipe," but I think you might have meant "fell strike" since fell has been archaically used to mean extremely evil, ferocious or deadly.
So I have noticed your use of Igor rather frequently. Is this an intentional choice or a grammatical error where you intend to use the word Ichor? Or i am completely off base, which is totally normal.