great chapter. very, very good.

You have all the right to believe in your writing ability. You are genuinely really good at it.

Good chapter. Very exciting. Every time Adrian starts to get personally involved in a conversation through his narration is like gold. The guy's so hypocritical, but you gotta love him for how interesting that makes him.

real good stuff

thanks for the chapter!

This was a good chapter. Thanks for writing!

Sure, I like the story. I'll stick with it. I usually don't comment much so you might not see me too often but I'll be around.

wow, i did not expect you to bring an emotional core to the story so soon. it's a good choice tho cuz then people know that you are writing a story that can get emotional and deep in personal issues and those who would not like it can leave. I felt for Adrian a bit, ngl. Keep up the good work!

Not bad. Not bad at all. We got ourselves a smart protag here. Booksmart, at least. His real intelligence we have yet to see.

Thank you for the notice, author-san!

Amazing chapter!

Grt chapter

Really glad about the new update! Keep going, man! Things are getting so much more interesting now after all, which is a lot to say considering how good this book has always been.