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Slothguy

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I am just here looking to express the stories in my head and try something I havn't done in a very long time. Please enjoy, I respect constructive criticism when it applies well to the stories.

2020-05-23 JoinedUnited States
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy2yr
    Commented

    please tell me the name is mechdonalds now .

    This pattern of wooing children into becoming their future customers was so strong because it continued to build up its momentum with each passing cycle! In fact, it was so strong when done right that it propelled that ancient restaurant chain from its modest beginnings on Old Earth before the Age of Space into one of the most far-reaching trans-galactic enterprises in the Age of Mechs!
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    he's bro-nut butter

    Ben woke up feeling like a bag full of smashed up nutsacks.
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Posted

    Hello! I am the author of this book. I have been writing Why the Gods for almost a year now. And through that whole time I realized, I never planned for that to be my only story. This book was rattling around in the back of my head. It's drastically different from my fiction books because this one takes place in areas I have actually been to. This book will be updated less frequently than my other one but the chapters will be consistently about 2k words and more thought out. I am taking more time to put this one together and I hope that it shows. The more I write the better I feel about my fiction. Please read this story and tell me what you think of it. The horror aspect will really be more about GORE than the traditional horror you get from Silent Hill or Resident Evil. Please motivate me along as you enjoy my story. If you read it please leave a review. I thank you for taking the time to read this book!

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    Longpork
    Horror · Slothguy
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    You look like a personal trainer on 600lb life.

    The man's fat cheeks started jiggling...
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    actually seen one used as a shifter on a wrangler. Still think someone should make one as a lid for a yeti cup.

    "You seem like the type of dude to buy a used fleshlight…"
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    The readers appreciate your efforts. Your writing has always been impressive. Keep it up!

    The biggest thing is it feels good knowing that putting all the extra effort into the story is being recognized, instead of focusing on churning out filler chapters to maximize release rate like other authors. So thank you to everyone that has shown their support! I'd name you here but I don't rat on nobody.
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    So now my question is chuck good Charlotte or Bad Charlotte. you got me samsara.

    After a long pause, she answered. "I-its…Charlotte."
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    super impressive. even gods of other books would be impressed. let's keep going!

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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    why do I secretly want Beluga to be the owner of a pick up artist trading seminar or something. like he fell in a walmart and turned the settlement into a business.

    Thinking about them, his mood improved a little. Earlier, Beluga texted him and Ben mentioned he received a promotion, at which point they made plans to celebrate at night by going out with the whole gang. Missing his buddies, Ben looked forward to it, but he looked forward to meeting beauties even more.
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    There is Good Charlotte and Bad Charlotte. Good Charlotte just hot cuckolded from across the room.

    Meanwhile, as the two of them returned to their tests, on the other side of the room, Charlotte stared at them…in utter disbelief…
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    face slap to the audience!

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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    The car for this shows up in a tan color

    Ben couldn't worry about that though, because he was in the middle of his own Uber Meats delivery.
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Posted

    The author has used humor and creativity to create a world that is easy to visualize, and the main character has a twisted sense of humor that works with the book. Go through this book with an open mind and don't skip words. Read thoroughly if you are going to really get the puns. Some of them are easy to miss. Pay attention to this one and really enjoy the story.

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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Slothguy
    Slothguy3yr
    Commented

    In the words of Bob Ross, There are no mistakes, only happy accidents. Maybe after thinking about it you will come back and resume this story. I have been enjoying it quite greatly. As always I will keep up with the others and offer any advice I can. Thanks! Slothguy

    Ch 52 Going on hiatus
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    War of the Gods: A Divine Comedy
    War · SamsaraWithWords
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