See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Good ^^ But for now it seems pretty good ! I haven't seen any mistake other then this one so your pretty good, well, a lot better than most french poeple I know xD Well I have some free time now so I'll go read some more chapter hehe x)

Oh god just saw the modification and it was "his" not "is" I feel bad that I tried to correct you but did a mistake too ;-; At least you did tought more about it than me x)

"that was on IS shoulder", "in" makes it a litte bit strange xD Continue the good work ^^

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