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too rushed,could have easily been an extra 200 chapters if pased properly,also interactions behind characters have no emotion behind them

for those who want to read this, it's best to read the mtl because just from the summary alone, I can tell that this translation is gonna be more 'mtl' than the actual mtl

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it was stated that trunks was born without a tail, same with goten

And so begins the rise of the planets of the apes

I think I've read somewhere that Uzumaki and Senju are related, so what u said shouldn't count

Keep up the good work, hope you can carry this novel till the end. Grammar a bit wishy-washy, here and there but everything thing else is great.

are the names messed up on purpose or did the author/translator have a stroke

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

grammar needs some polishing