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  • the_World
    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    Yes. Sometimes, Elohim's character could be less relevant than Shidou's (or someone else) at some point. It will feel like Elohim is just an inserted character into the story of Date a live.

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    It means, that Elohim could not be in the main focus of the plot for a few chapters. —Someone else could be the "main-character" for a few chapters.

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    I wouldn't really call it romance… but yes, there will be "love"…

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Dao_of_Melancholy

    I really hope that it will be better this time xD Your thoughts on this chapter?

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    the_World2yr
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    Yeah, I'm back~

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    I will actually change his personality a bit — not to a great extent… but still a bit. Most people will clearly not like Elohim's personality when he interacts with a certain Spirit… Let's just say he still cares about people… but in a different way. Perhaps… do you know Chainsaw man? Yeah, Elohim's personality will be a bit like Makima's from Chainsaw man as that personality fits his goals<— which I don't want to spoiler. And I actually planned to make such a scene where he tells the AST: "I am a Spirit" <— Elohim said while smiling calmly. But such scene will appear a bit later…

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    Damn your ideas are good! Makes me want to rewrite the fanfiction xD I never intended to use the Holy Grail because it actually has its own will and it is EVIL. Yeah, I thought about the whole concept about his illness and I think I will remove it — It will come a bit later in the story. I think many people wouldn't accept that Elohim could change the mind of the Spirit of origin <SPOILER> after she killed a few thousand girl just to revive him but yeah…… let's just say I planned something else with her……… something with her Sephiroth tree. The whole Senpai thing will also be a bit different. ——AND Elohim actually isn't the King of Despair —Elohim just looks like him. But maybe it is my fault because I made a mistake and it sounded wrong at the end…

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    I'm honestly excited to read your comments to the 'new' first chapter because the beginning is going to answer your questions—or probably just going to make you more confused. But I will try to make Elohim the main character for a certain reason. —BUT Shidou will still be there and have his moments. I honestly just call Elohim here a beta-character because there will be moments where he does nothing… —Maybe Hime will do a few things for him instead of doing something himself…(<--you don't have to understand that…yet) I love your idea about the whole Qliphoth Tree — I have a (similar) idea (in mind) and let's just say he maybe will have his own Qliphoth tree… but in a different way. ——And you can't believe how happy it makes that you still remember this fanfiction and the whole death match thing.

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Amon91

    Got it. I will try my best~

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Amon91

    I will try to make him "normal" but it is really hard for me because so many different characters exist besides him and I can't just ignore them —I actually can but I don't want to…

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    Yeah, about the omnipotent-being who gave him his powers… let's just say I planned something and maybe that being isn't as powerful as some would think… And about your idea with the Qliphoth tree, that idea sounds actually quite good but it sounds a bit too stretched out for me. And I already planned something else with the actual Qliphoth tree in the story. —Shidou is actually one of my favorite main characters!

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    Yeah, about the "reality altering bullet"… First of all, it makes me happy that you seem to remember this fanfiction. Second, I don't want to use that bullet to often because it feels like a dumb "plot-hole". This is a little spoiler to my fanfiction — I want to make Shidou seal the Spirits because Elohim and him should form a "friendship" — That doesn't tell you anything but please have s little patience and see/read what I have planned in the near future. —and I always try to pay attention to the comments / thoughts of the readers of my fanfiction.

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to MrKarma

    It makes me really happy that you enjoyed it!!! And it would make me happy if people from here would read my 'next' fanfiction… but I don't expect too much xD

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    I actually read that :D ! Yeah, I will also try to make Shidou a side character but he still needs to seal the Spirits… And killing him off wouldn't work either… Because of light novel stuff…

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    You mean the difference between the king and his horse? Yes I know it. Instinct, one uses its instinct and the other their head and logic. But something like that doesn't exist in the world of Date a live. Every single person in Date a live has a different kind of strength… Sometimes you have to use instinct to win… And sometimes you have to use logic to win…

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Lord_Pendragon

    It makes me really happy that someone waited for a chapter :) First: I just call him myself a beta-character because Elohim takes 35% of the story, Shidou around 25%, Hime around 15%, the other Spirits take 15% and memebers of the AST will take the last 10%. —So… basically every character have their moments in it and I also call him a beta-character so you won't be disappointed if Elohim doesn't appear in 2-3 chapters. Ah, and I will also change Elohim's personality a bit, not much but a bit, because some actions of him wouldn't make sense—but who knows if you will notice the changes. And he will not really hide that he is a Spirit… but only because I make a few changes in the story. —But he will definitely never say something like, "Hey I'm a Spirit"

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    the_World2yr
    Replied to Amon91

    Why? Because it is hard to focus only on one person. I will try to focus on "Elohim" but there are just too many characters. Elohim, Hime, Shidou, Tohka, Rinne, Rio, Yoshino, Yoshinon, Kotori, Reine, Natsumi, Origami, Kurumi, Miku, Kaguya, Yuzuru, Nia, Mukuro, Mayuri, Nibelcole, Mio, Ryouko, Mikie, Mildred, Artemisia, Ellen, Westcott, Minerva, Elliot, Mana, Karen, Shidou's parents, Jessica, Cecile, Leonora, Ashley, Tamae, Ai, Mai, Mii, the seven Servants and their Master at the beginning, other Reincarnations… —There are just too many characters so it is hard to put Elohim in the main focus.

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    the_World2yr
    Commented

    I hope you guys hate me with this xD

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    the_World3yr
    Replied to Amon91

    Ah, then I would understand your opinion better because at 18 she would probably look like her mother *cough*

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    the_World3yr
    Replied to Amon91

    I understand. I actually don't like harems because they end always a bit weird but let's just see what the future holds for us~

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