sanlat97

they already know what a captain is in westeros. remember when the second sons met with Daenerys? one of the was Daario (a lieutenant). and the other 2 guys were captains.

there is no such thing as a church in westeros. they simply call it The Faith

this feels like it could be a good story. only criticism I have is the dialogue. ppl in your story don't say more than one sentence with 6 words at a time. it feels weird when the characters talk it's really off putting. also you should age up the mc if you're gonna have him act like a full grown assassin. adult mind or not, no amount of training can get a child's body to fight 6+ men at once

wait until vallar is older before introducing the dragons. great story btw

Clegane is 8ft in height not 10. for reference, giants in asoiaf are between 10 and 14 feet tall.

he's been king for 10 years at this point

one small correction here. the three singers have green leaves. it's one of the things that makes it so unique

it was forged from the heart of a fallen star. they don't really comment more about the material other than that and that it's basically like valyrian steel except it white in color

get well soon man!

the water gardens didn't exist back then. the prince of dorne created the water gardens as a gift to his Targaryen bride when dorne joined the rest of westeros decades later.