so, I'm only writing this because of the absurd switch up that occurs in the story around chapter 220. after that, up until current, it's a completely different novel from what is advertised. before that, this book is amazing. I couldn't stop reading. afterward, however, it's complete nonsense. Author, seriously... wtf are you doing?

The author seriously needs to stop stupifying the MC for plot convenience. it's incredibly annoying.

this. seriously. wtf.

So, I'll go ahead and just throw in my bit of shameless pandering. I'm pretty happy with chapter one, especially for my first attempt at really writing a novel. Please, leave me reviews and your thoughts in the reviews section here. I will do my best to read each and every one of them. I look forward to seeing what you all think.

While the premise of the story is interesting enough to engage the reader, the writing quality and grammar are poor enough that what is written is often confusing. It feels like this was primarily written by an AI around the quality you might find with some of the older models used publicly and never fully edited for logical flow and readability. The story certainly shows promise, but the author needs to put significantly more effort into editing his content before releasing it.