Thx for the chap!

Thx for the chapter!

I think that achievement is talking about how he was the first to use the return stone

Honestly not that bad. It's certainly not the best work, but its considerably better than others that are on here. --- - -- -- ---- ---

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Thx for the chapter

It's a fairly good story so far, standard overpowered MC, but the cultivation world was digitized and is slightly different than the norm. Overall, its an interesting new take on the standard cultivation novel.

I think its 100 for theoretical, 100 for practical, and 100 for their rank, so 300 total, and he lost points for only being a 2nd rank

thx for the chap

Great story. Wonderful character development and world building. I look forward to seeing the rest of the novel. One thing that could be improved however, is the stability of the updates.

Thx for the chapter!

As I look upon this book full of empty pages, I see my own reflection. And because my own reflection is so amazing and brilliant, I decided to rate this 5 stars.

Great story. No grammar and spelling errors, Character development is great, and World building is interesting. Great plot, and I look forward to reading future chapters.

Thx for the Chapter!!

Thx for the Chapter! It would be great if you could post one but whatever fits your schedule.

Great Job!

Great work

This is an amazing and unique story, with excellent world building and character development. I look forward to seeing how the story progresses.

Great Work!

Great Chapter