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BigHend00725dReplied to DaoistOfSupremacyliterally rules of war, someone has to establish them
Much as Yama loathed to admit it, the boy also made confined life more tolerable. Whether they liked it or not, the boy often ate with them (initially to prove that the food was not compromised in any way) and always asked if they had any needs (other than freedom) that their captors could attend to. He helped write and then pass along messages back home, made sure their pot of tea was never empty, and served as the friendlier face for the newer prisoners to get accustomed to.- BigHend0071mthReplied to Jibberflex
it's a part of the plot bud, at the end of the day it's a great way to show he isn't invincible and can make stupid mistakes like any other person, literally story telling 101.
Without hesitation, I reached into my satchel, pulling out a checkboard with paper on it and a piece of sharp-tipped charcoal. - BigHend0072mthReplied to Poisonsectelder04_
well I mean that's technically the reason why it's stated that Jesus didn't cry, especially in the Gospel of Luke which was made for none Jews
"Strange," said the Grand Maester, "Everything seems in order. It's as if he came out sleeping." - BigHend0072mthReplied to Jibberflex
God forbid a character have dimensions to them
Without hesitation, I reached into my satchel, pulling out a checkboard with paper on it and a piece of sharp-tipped charcoal. - BigHend0072mthReplied to WebReaderPub
I'm guessing if you want to get philosophical it's stated that Jesus didn't cry at birth so a correlation could be made there? Though probably giving too much credit
"Strange," said the Grand Maester, "Everything seems in order. It's as if he came out sleeping." - BigHend0078mthCommentedCh 1333 The End
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how meta
Ugh… Why is writing so hard? - BigHend0071yrCommentedAnd as both the main female lead and also the director cum supervisor of the play, Kiyomi was getting a lot of attention from everyone.
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- BigHend0071yrReplied to Holyhandgrenade
that is a good point however we also have to consider decay of the dye as any togas from the time will have had their colours faded - not to mention any preserved ones will have been in the Mediterranean sun. But yeah, the purple we know of is synthetic and so isn't as close to red.
Being an unremarkable man who lived an unremarkable life, you notice the difference in your behavior quite easily. Recognizing that I now had the general fondness that most Ancient Chinese people had for the color Purple, a new appreciation for silence, and the habit of keeping a slight smile on my face didn't take a long time. - BigHend0071yrCommented
lucky he's a family guy
The patriarch ran up to them immediately, hugging them tightly to his chest and asking them to forgive his stupidity. Guess he's actually a family man deep inside? - BigHend0071yrCommented
"this is a test"
Slowly Ryan gripped the fabric of his shirt before inching it up ever so tantalizingly. - BigHend0071yrReplied to Nekomiko_succubus
no need for "the" in this scenario, it's fine as is. She may have said "the first lieutenant" if she speaking about which detachment or company she was with - but even then colloquially she probably still wouldn't have
"My name is First Lieutenant Valeria Waters." Speaking in a loud, commanding tone, she addressed the audience, "I'd first and foremost like to congratulate you all on behalf of the Kheaweth Military for completing the orientation test." As she spoke, her green military uniform bounced up and down. - BigHend0071yrCommented
bit messy this paragraph. Should be "black fish", I said "or..." then a separate line for black fish's dialogue. keep up the good work though
''lord Hohenzollern'' said Brynden ''black fish, I said or do you prefer me to call you Brynden'' heh heh, I don't care, my question, when are we leaving for the reach? - BigHend0071yrCommentedThis book has been deleted.
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And now, the end is here. And so I face the final curtain.
"Gaaaah!" Cell grunted as the beam hits him and fully evaporates his body, not leaving a single cell from his body to regenerate and come back from.detailA Perfectionist of a Hero (Dragonball Z and Justice League Crossover)Anime & Comics · Triple_Sweet - BigHend0071yrReplied to Duke_Asmodeus
totally understand, keep up the good work man
"Strange" (Old man) - BigHend0071yrReplied to Duke_Asmodeus
that's understandable and thanks for the reply, it's down to preference and each author is different. Grammatically speaking it's not needed but I can understand why people would want them
"Strange" (Old man) - BigHend0071yrCommented
yo, just some advice (and I know I'm fairly behind so you may have sorted it but there's no need to put "(old man)" after his dialogue, so long as you already make it clear who's talking it's not needed and otherwise can be replaced with 'muttered/said the old man' - just breaks immersion and feels off. keep up the good work, man.
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