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Devon_Cota1yrCommentedCh 12 chapter 11( edited with system)- Devon_Cota2yrCommented
I'm not sure if its just me but I think this god is lonely
While Ray fell asleep. Somewhere far beyond the world of Harry Potter, the god who reincarnated Ray sat on the tatami and drank tea. "You are mistaken, my son, this world will give you a lot. In the future you will remember this more than once with a smile." - Devon_Cota2yrCommentedCh 10 Hospital.
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Option one: Alice being herself with little bit crazy - Devon_Cota2yrCommentedCh 8 Speed Running to Cannon 2
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(Vote here. Also if you want too, tell me who should be the love interest. *Cough* Milim best girl *cough*) - Devon_Cota2yrCommented
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1. Naruto Inherits Uzumaki Legacy and defects from konoha. - Devon_Cota2yrCommented
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-Fleur Delacour - Devon_Cota2yrCommented
the ultimate cultivation art
Knowing what the man was thinking I quickly explain the big bang theory too him. He was an instant believer. He even had some tears in his eyes. "Art really is an explosion. But so is life!" - Devon_Cota2yrCommented
did anyone else read this like the tootsie pop commercial
The world may never know… - Devon_Cota2yrReplied to Devon_Cota
lol
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I think you shouldn have him like save hayima and have him fall down into the abyss or have the apostles coming attack and label him a hair tick and him falling into the bus and then thinking he died from itI think you shouldn't have a pattern like save hodgy may and have him fall down into the abyss or have the apostles coming attack and label him a heretic and him falling into the abyss and them thinking he died from the fall i guess it depend on what image you want him to be seen as by his classmates and others who don't know him
This chapter has been deleted. - Devon_Cota2yrCommentedCh 17 Notice
- Devon_Cota2yrCommentedCh 4 The Great Orcus Labyrinth I
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"Ahhh! I can't believe that it was destroyed!" Hiroto cried out as he picked up the remains of the manga store. - Devon_Cota2yrPosted
Honestly writing qualities really good,the story's really good,your character is awesome,and I love the powers you gave him the only problem I see is that it seems you forget what you wrote in the past just small details here and there nothing really big but thats my review keep it up looking forward for the next chapter
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honestly make their name similar but girly to indicates that they been gender bent
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"fist of love"
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