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the pace isn't the problem it's that the chapters are kinda small for the amount of detail . i love the story don't get me wrong and I think you're doing great . one other thing that i personally like is that when a reader has an omnipotent view of the story some times . like in this case in some arcs you can do it(with the pov from teachers discussing ), what I mean by this is why is there another race in the leader summit? is it some sort of deal with the academy did they breach the portal? stuff like that. You can't do it for the main reason of the story tho like why Atticus got thrown in here . sorry for the long post. just what i think would make the story better , not everyone has to agree.
Dear Xietianas much as I Like you and your novel money doesn't grow on trees (at least for me) would be appreciated if you could notify us of your hiatus so I don't have to waste my money . I'm sorry if you find my comment offensive but as I said I don't have much money ...
you are probably right cause he got his spiritual power from there I think
I believe it was stated earlier that he didn't have blood or organs ... I may be wrong