Is fine, Victor. Just try not push youself to hard, we are here with you. Since you communicate with us frequently, we know that you don't do it because you want to.

It starts very well, honestly, although the beginning is forced and an event happens for him to go to the league of shadows just because of the reason that the author wants to get the waifus there, the plot starts well for a fanfic... But everything it goes downhill when there is descendant drama, and these multiverse OP entities meddling in the MC's life. Why can't we just have a direct reincarnation? Why does he need to reconcile with his system? Why does it have to be so complicated? Now, in the recent chapter, he was an existence similar to an Edritch god, he was unique, now thanks to his SIMP for his death, he 'forcibly' signed a kind of contract for his soul to be handed over to her if he died thus completely losing its unique status. Yes, this had a lot of potential, but it was completely destroyed by the pointless drama, and these multiverse beings that keep sprouting out of nowhere. It's only the 20th chapter, it's at the power level of a city destroyer, but these beings keep appearing like flies, meh.

idk, man. i do not care too, I like the history, i just turn of my brain, after all is smuuut history, not have much sense, but this scene with another man is just pointless to me.

No, is more like the author like write about other guys doing this with they woman, just felt pointless for me, and the Scene with Batman and Katana it was just no sense.

Why? Just Why? Anyone here wants to see a history who the MC is not part of, just feel like filler.

I don't understand why the author insists on doing snu snu stories with girls other than the MC, it just seems like filler, advice? Just ignore the chapters that have a man's name x another woman's name, it's just filler.

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Victor Weismann's work? You can tell me I'm in!!! Where do I sign this business!! I want to!!! Take my money!!!!!!!! you need my money and I want chapter!!!

Yes. If I were to write something like this, I would prefer to see the original Narcissa who is arrogant and noble.

Posting again. for some reason the review bugged. For real? I still don't believe what I'm reading ... Nacisa went from an arrogant and noble woman, to a broken and 'strong' woman, as the author likes to say. This is just bullshit, I bet he liked to write this chapter. This is disgusting ... If you liked this chapter 26, you should go to jail.

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