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Dao_Creation_God

Dao_Creation_God

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2020-05-16 JoinedSweden
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God6mth
    Replied to Zurbluris

    Sure, time to wait for me then

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    Evolution begins with an ant colony
    Fantasy · Zurbluris
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God6mth
    Posted

    I will give this novel a solid 3 stars, I like the premise but I feel that this novel isn't for me, but I will also say what I believe would make it more for me. 1st to much slang, as far as I understood it so is the MC's age in the 15-18 age bracket. BUT the slang makes me think of him as in either of one of two groups, less than 10 and over 35. Less than 10 because it reminds me of kids who just tries to use every slang they know to try and sound older. Over 35 because it reminds me of older adults learning slang to try and be more "hip" than they actually are. It feels rather weird in how he talks to himself/us when he uses excessive amounts of slang. 2nd, is he a coward; brave one; or a loser. Which is his real him? Was his reserved nature something forced by society (bullying), and his brave persona is his real nature, OR is this a coping mechanism? 3rd, too little time is spent in his ant-form before he evolves into a human. And I personally believe that even if his human-form is because of his human soul so should it still be too early if he doesn't have any major differences (external skeleton/scales, antenna, etc.) in the human realm, since MONSTERS should be human LIKE not human. 4th, too little time is spent on the system and it's abilities, some skills/abilities would have been fun to see in the shop, how is the cost of skill bestowal decided, is it purely by strength of the parties or is it more complex than that. 5th, when writing about others which isn't in the immediate story/arc, please do that either in a separate chapter or make it easier to differentiate from the rest of the chapter with ****** or -------

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    Evolution begins with an ant colony
    Fantasy · Zurbluris
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God6mth
    Commented

    I am laughing like crazy, I thought he would be superheroes for little kids and grow that way, not like this.

    Ch 11 Monsters!
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    Global Awakening: I created the system
    Fantasy · Ghost_Worker
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God6mth
    Posted

    I will say it like this, I really really like this novel. It is different, it hits differently. And because I am reading Walker of worlds so do I know OR at least I hope I have an idea on where/how the story will go. But I have a question: Is this on hiatus, are you making a giant backlog of chapters, are you having writers block. I am asking because I want MOAR!

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    Rise Of The Worm Sovereign
    Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God6mth
    Replied to Grand_Void_Daoist

    If you get a good conclusion at that time, sure, but this feels like a novel that technically could go on longer. Especially since I really like the slower moments, when he cultivates (purely), it goes by fast, which is fun, but my favourite moments are when you spend a chapter or a few to describe when he is studying something which adds to the world-building while also in my opinion strengthens him as a character, not just in strength/cultivation but also as a person.

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    Walker Of The Worlds
    Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God8mth
    Replied to N_0038

    i think "bike" is a collection name of them. But I agree that it is written horribly.

    Ch 4 Set a Small Target
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    Worldwide Auto Transformation: Invincibility Starts With Ultimate Enhancement
    Games · I'm Feifei
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God8mth
    Posted

    it was really good in writing quality but it started with MTL at chapter 41 which destroyed it.

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    Everyone Has Four Skills
    Urban · Li Xinsui
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God8mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 1. Activate Blessed Land
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    Global Blessed Land: I Can Add Attributes On The Buildings
    Eastern · Pond Fish In October
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God8mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 1. Activate Blessed Land
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    Global Blessed Land: I Can Add Attributes On The Buildings
    Eastern · Pond Fish In October
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God8mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 1. Activate Blessed Land
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    Global Blessed Land: I Can Add Attributes On The Buildings
    Eastern · Pond Fish In October
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God8mth
    Posted

    ..........................................

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    My Items Have an Upgrade Panel
    Sci-fi · Wolfberry is not Tasty
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God10mth
    Replied to chichi32310

    It is off the idea that if you keep your life neat and tidy (like your bed) you are taking things seriously.

    Ch 4 System Activation, 20,000 Bitcoins
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    From Soldier to Officer: A Game Addict's Journey
    Urban · Song Of Special Troops
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God10mth
    Commented

    126kg... and he is only 1.7 to 1.8 meters... do they mean pounds (lbs)?

    Ch 2 Driving a Mercedes-Benz with One Hand and Enlisting in the Army
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    From Soldier to Officer: A Game Addict's Journey
    Urban · Song Of Special Troops
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God11mth
    Replied to empire1

    If you aren't really nice; a good friend etc so would you probably drag people down to feel better themselves, especially in such worlds where death is basically everywhere but you can still live like a normal person.

    Ch 2 S-Rank Talent? The Weakest Beast Tamer in History!
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    My Beast Is So Powerful that It Evolves Itself into the God Level
    Fantasy · Old Rabbit At The Flower Planter's
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God1yr
    Posted

    Look and understand the stars. .............................................................................................................

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    Spiritual Energy: I Just Want To Farm Peacefully
    Urban · 400 Grams Of Loquat
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God1yr
    Replied to Sorenmageofmareth

    rather, it can be seen as a warning, left as a whetstone, to not make mass panic in the city

    Ch 28 Singa's Attitude
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    Global Job Change: Starting With The Hidden Job, Lord Of The Death
    Games · Frozen Tenderness
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God1yr
    Replied to Young_fruit_Smiley

    me too, I'm reading this around 1 in the morning...

    Ch 6 The Story of the Mountain Temple
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    Spirit Realm Walker
    Sci-fi · Paperboy
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God1yr
    Commented

    Excited? Do you not mean anxious? Sure excited works grammatically, but he cares and have emotions so anxious would work better.

    Zhang Fengyu hurriedly went forward. "Lu Yan, don't be excited. What's important now is your sister's situation. You're Director Huang, right? How's Lu Yan's sister's situation?"
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    Global Job Change: Starting With The Hidden Job, Lord Of The Death
    Games · Frozen Tenderness
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God1yr
    Commented

    But asian turtles (including soft shelled turtles) loves to eat cockroaches. So she is her own predator.

    What is a cockroach? A soft-shelled turtle!
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    Tempest of the Stellar War
    War · Skeleton Wizard
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  • Dao_Creation_God
    Dao_Creation_God1yr
    Replied to DamnItJessy

    probably low since it is not for fighting

    [Welcome to the world of Monopoly. Please collect your initial funds!]
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    Global Martial Arts: I Chose Monopoly As My Game Talent
    Urban · Monopoly
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