The story is becoming a bit boring i found Maybe it would be good to finish the story in 10 or 15 chapter instead of making it last for nothing?

I find it stupid that you made his personality like this with no respect for him and the guardian .

Didn't see harm other but the men tried to kill him and his friends.. And he let him go like that...

In the end you just let a op OC go who I suppose will come back latter hyper cheat and katsuo will need to face him and you will just make him op again...

I hope you will kill zeus one day he is so annoying!!

I have the impression you just don't make your Mc evolve and just make the OC stronger and stronger and the Mc seam weak ( English is my 2 language sorry)

I love this book but it's so annoying to see him obey all order his aunt tell him like a dog !! I know that you say it's because he miss his mother but that doesn't make sense he his 28 mentally and he was perfect whithout her

I'm a little disappointed of this chapter the OC reincarnate is a bit to much

Maybe you should do something that will make him mature during his stay a hogward like someone close to him die or something?

I find the story was good in the beginning but now I find it boring and bland. And his wife will probably the woman in the sea I forgot her name

Remind me the scene with sukuna. It's good for the moment I hope that continues to be this good

Misery!! Momo is overused its always her in mha fanfic

100% he will lose 🤔😂

Yeah but the Blade in the front not the left

+1

Yeah I just hope it won't last too long like 40 chapter or so.

Can't take them

Why not just add Natasha that already a lot of girl?