JewelQueen_001
I love to read books, and that's why I'm here. I never have much to say, but when I do I don't cater to popularity. Even though I hate drama, I need to be honest in my opinion to let others improve.
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JewelQueen_0017mthCommentedI really like this Major Payne character:)
"I don't know if I want to kiss the General for training such talents or kick him for not training the rest." Major Payne snarls.- JewelQueen_00111mthCommented
Wasn't he just laying on the sofa a couple sentences ago?....now he's standing?
As the light faded, Chen Kun elegantly stood rooted to the ground. - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
famous last words...
Before Snow Dew replies anything, Flame Emperor pointed at Williard and said, "You, come with us. Since you are the weakest here, stick with us." As Williard silently walked towards their side much to the envy of other people since he doesn't even have to lift a finger and get free EXP with two strongest players around, meanwhile, Flame Emperor thought, "as if I would get my daughter get close to that prick. This ordinary, silent and a weak guy is better." - JewelQueen_0011yrReplied to kinggaming
I agree. If anything, it should cost a bit of stamina at most
Flying (level 1): You can travel from place to place with the help of your wings, Costs 10MP per minute; - JewelQueen_0011yrPosted
Positive: 1. Love Rewind/Reincarnation plots, this one has a system plot added which I also like. 2. Chapters are not 3 pages, so I get more and who doesn't love more? 3. MC isn't a pushover or total jerk. He's courageous, smart, team player, and family man. Negative: 1. You don't know where the MC is located in the world, until many chapters in, which is confusing. The world building is practically non-existent. All you know is that humanity is being invaded, it adds mystery sure. But the intro to a plot needs to be captivating, not generic and vague. Coming into a genre that is heavily competitive, this intro had very little NEW. 2. The intro had too many plot holes, I want to ask this: If you watched the world destroyed and had the chance to go back in time to save your loved ones...would you use the little time you had to go to college? delegate preparations with little hands on? tell your friend and a technical stranger before your 'beloved parents,' what's going on? sleep?(that last one is based on realistic PTSD, anyone who has seen real death much less millions die in front of them would not sleep well) 3. The swearing is too much. Every other word out of anyone's mouth is the F word. As a reader, I see swear words as filler words such as 'like,' 'um,' 'uh.' Your word count is amazing, but I feel cheated. Again, this is a readers viewpoint. Most people who swear this much in a novel, are writing how they speak. But it really detracts from the plot. Granted some situations could realistically need a swear word, just not that much.
- JewelQueen_0011yrReplied to JewelQueen_001
aka: Goku
"This… feels like the sphere[1] that a ninja anime's main character used. But this one of mine has strong lighting effects." - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
oh, I must be old, I first thought of Kakarot
"This… feels like the sphere[1] that a ninja anime's main character used. But this one of mine has strong lighting effects." - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
you mean timeline?
It took Arthur nearly three hours to finish making the pipeline he would be following. - JewelQueen_0011yrReplied to BookCat
Amen, glad someone said it!
So, through Le Yan's words, the matter of breaking off the engagement was spread. - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
untrue, but I love the attitude:) who doesn't like a little extra?:)
Being handsome was for life! - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
Author-san said 3000 square meters, not feet...that's almost half the size of a football field, so definitely larger than an office. I thought it sounded small at first too, and had to reread it:)
The villa covered an area of nearly 3000 square meters. - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
The MC doesn't know math as an electrician?!
Did he become a billionaire this time? - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
so hot he on fire....got it
Many girls gave him lustful looks, making Lu Yu feel a little awkward. His well-defined chest muscles and abs were much more defined than the others. - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
Unique and subtle! I like it:) 👍
The Guild Master of the Deicide Guild. - JewelQueen_0011yrReplied to CipherPolZERO
As an INTJ personality....I agree^_^ ...I have a best friend because she is also INTJ...
"Don't ask questions you shouldn't ask. I won't tell you even if you ask. Come on, use your connections to make a bet on my win. Remember, keep low-key. If I don't make enough money, I'll kill you." - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
For his age, good choice. Most are not ready or stable in life at that time anyway.
Plus, women would only affect the speed at which he could improve! - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
Sometimes I don't feel like thinking, but this time my brain worked so I was good:)
This means he would have a total of 137 mutation points and still have exactly 50 points after using it. - JewelQueen_0011yrCommented
Dolly, you speak to my Dragon Soul!
"Then what are we waiting for? Let's check out the treasures right away! We can't afford to waste our time!" and without waiting for me, she darted straight into the whack-an-ore mini-game room.