Daniel_Dillinger

I couldn't ruin the dots with more comments so it's down here was dying after clicking to see what they were then the replies got me

wow for those who criticize grammer you must remember some people have dyslexia and those grammer mistakes to us is like giving a break to our minds where you complain other feel excited to see they're not the only ones to struggle so please think and read the entire thing multiple times as i have you will learn everyone makes mistakes and being able to read such a developing story which you can get at least 2 chapters free a day is great have a good life

people are upset at the grammar but don't understand this book is worth figuring it ou

you got me good with this

I feel like Lux would be like nah black fire do your thing Black fire "OOOMMNOMNOM"

nvm there is another 10 missing lol

10 is from the one he just consumed so the math is still right just writen weird

im legit crying happy tears for remmy😂

i realy wish there was more to read i just binge read this in a week i was so good there are some minor problems with words but the story is never messed up

the queen was good and so was the 2nd princess