Low overall quality that doesn’t make sense in context of the overall universe. Not only does Han Solo awaken with Force abilities, but he can apparently perform Grandmaster level feats without any training whatsoever. Stopping blaster bolts and hiding their presence from Darth Vader are just two examples of what he does without having even one lesson in Force use. Add in the fact that the main character is constantly giving his ass-backwards philosophies in big monologues that, and there is very little here to actually enjoy. This had some real potential, but it was squandered entirely by giving Han force abilities.

Stopping blaster bolts is supposed to be master level stuff. Like Yoda could do it, but Obi-Wan couldn’t. So Han doing it with zero training doesn’t make a lick of sense.

Gasp! Another cliffhanger! WHO would have thought?

You got a real cliffhanger problem, you know that? After the like fourth one they start losing their effect. I’m not eagerly awaiting the next chapter to find out what happens anymore, I’m rolling my eyes in frustrating, wondering why I even bother reading every new chapter when I know nothing of importance will happen. Like this one, an entire chapter wasted on empty set up, and you end it before we get to the real events.

Meh, if you were going to do The Hangover, he should have done it as an actual movie he made. All you did was take all the humor out of one of the funniest movies of all time, and use the scenario as a half chapter subplot that felt out of place. Kind of disappointing.

Compared to Lee, who at the age of 12 had weights on his arms and legs so heavy that it shook the ground of an entire standing when he took them off…50kg on every limb every second of every day isn’t even a warm up.

Neither is this guy. Just stole it and gave it an HP tag because they don’t know who Harry Dresden is.

Of course his Spirit isn’t being trained, he forgot a critical part! He must live without AC in the summer, and without heat in the winter! How else can he properly train his willpower!?

Honestly? He’s gotta be real careful about that marketing. Make a shell company studio, and only use stage names for the actors and actresses. Because the backlash of people getting mad that they were lied to could, and would, sink their studio and destroy those peoples careers. That’s what happened with the real Blair Witch Project after all.

This is the most obviously AI generated story I have found yet, and it is terrible to boot. I don’t even understand what is going on. A kid with Jack Frost powers shows up in Westeros, and fights the Others? Maybe? With ice castles without actually fighting? Which Daenerys hears in Mereen somehow? Just a disjointed dumpster fire of an AI generated story.

While I do agree that that does seem to be the case in general, there isn’t any one example that can prove it. I have never even hear of Tabata, much less Hungry Joker, so it could have failed for simply not having enough exposure more than any content issue. It is like looking at the reasons that foreign movies fail in the US. Sure, you can say it is because we Americans are racist…and you wouldn’t really be wrong. But it also ignores the fact that American movie companies are the undisputed leaders of commercial entertainment, and put out more content than any one person could ever consume. Why would the average American watch foreign movies with often badly dubbed dialogue, when there are more movies in their native language than they could ever possibly watch. Only the best of the best of foreign entertainment will ever be noticed here as long as that situation continues.

You are thinking of college parties my friend, high school parties tend to be age exclusive. You wouldn’t catch a senior dead at a party full of freshman, just like you wouldn’t see seniors inviting any freshman (except for the creepy dudes trying to score with a freshman girl.) So this party being full of freshman actually makes sense. The only thing unrealistic about it was the lack of people smoking (both cigarettes and pot) the lack of people throwing up all over the place, and the fact that no one got busted by the cops (cause some idiot always gets busted after leaving their first freshman party.)

You know, I hand t mentioned it before, but the formatting is off. Any given paragraph should only have one quote. “Like this see.” Said Harry “Yes I see that.” Replied Ron. “Makes it easier to read the quotes because a massive paragraph with six quotes looks like a jumbled mess.” Finished Hermione.

Love the more fair portrayal of Ron. Personally, Ron Bashing is one of the major reasons I have mostly given up on HP fanfiction lately, so it’s nice to see a story that takes a more fair approach to the guy.

That is entirely fanon. Not a single bit of that is based on canon.

So everything that Harry does or does not do is Dumbledore’s fault?

Dumbledore has the Invisibility Cloak right now so he KNOWS that it isn’t a MOD being declared.

I’d go DC, let him flex his own creativity instead of just copying more old stuff.

DC comics have been around since like the 1930’s, Batman was based on the noir detective genre popular at the time. Superman became popular in the 40’s, when the idea of an invincible American hero very attractive to Americans at the time.

So are we going to do something different from the original Blood Ties?