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Very naive. Written by a child, because I don't suspect an adult of such naivety. Descriptions and lack of details and lack of maturity in descriptions. A story for children, and very naive children at that. Adults will get bored after a few pages. Unfortunately, my rating is low as is the quality of this thing.

Boring . The author writes at length and the plot drags on without any sense. Forced aura of mystery and monologues. Mc is naive and gives the impression of a stupid person. The author makes Mc a victim where a normal person would have sought help from teachers etc. a long time ago. ​

The very beginning shows the author's ignorance and lack of basic knowledge. The impact and noise of explosions in open space, the author impresses with his knowledge from the very beginning, and then it gets even worse. A swamp without logic and stupidity Mc. Waste of time. Rating minus 100

Waste of time. I wonder what kind of idiots give five points each.Mc stupid with an IQ of 10. Giving a system to a Neanderthal is how you sum up this shit. The author doesn't know how to write a plot. Frequent logical errors and the author's stupidity are some of the many flaws of this story. It's a waste of time on this point. My rating is minus 100 ​

The author doesn't know how to write a plot. Frequent logical errors and the author's stupidity are some of the many flaws of this story. It's a waste of time on this point. My rating is minus 100

There should be a large inscription at the beginning of the book (All actions and behaviors with weapons are wrong). It's a stupid story, and it's obvious that the author is an idiot. It's clear that the author doesn't know how to safely handle weapons. Only a complete moron and a mental idiot would load a gun being sold to an untrained person, and even in a store next to other people. A great example of an amateur writing about weapons. RATING Minus 100 ​

Waste of time. The author doesn't know how to write a plot. Frequent logical errors and the author's stupidity are some of the many flaws of this story. It's a waste of time on this point. My rating is minus 100

The author is a dunce and a mediocre scribe. The statistics of characters, items, weapons and armor are made up. The plot is so stupid and geared towards kids with an IQ of 10 because I can't think of any other reason. The first good RPG master would insult the author and send him to play with goats in Afghanistan. The character of Adrian (Name for daun) is treated as if she cannot think for herself and accepts everything thoughtlessly. Being about 17 years old, he would have been struck by the layout and type of statistics as well as the total lack of balance in the game. Score minus 1000

A tearful story about a naive fool. The story would make sense if it were sharp and bloody. Unfortunately, the princess appears and saves the prince. What a crap. So How a hero was made of a slut.

Nice story with one big plus - no non-stop sex scenes. The sex scenes are subdued and rather non-irritating without kinky scenes. The plot is interesting and even surprised me a few times.

The author does not even try to broaden the intellectual horizons of the characters and, as a result, we have. A naive story about a naive virgin and a stupid girl who can only grow and move her hips (sex). The author probably introduced two idiotic characters on purpose, because I cannot indicate any other reason. Very poor characters and outstanding lack of character development. The logic and description of the characters are stupid. The basic fallacy of logic of how an educated person can accept an uneducated and stupid person (apart from sex). The story is crammed with stupid things and a lack of sense and rethinking the plot.