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EndeR251mthCommentedCould you explain what the level 2 and 3 does. It’s been a while since I read this story so I forgot.
The Chakra drain is greater than Level 3 Noc and Mir by a decent margin, but not as bad as Level 3 Nue.- EndeR251mthCommented
Do you mean regeneration
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Do you remember what it was called
"Crap," Austin muttered before another Spearow hit his head and this time he tripped over a rock and was sent rolling across the ground as Pikachu cried out in surprise. - EndeR252mthCommentedCh 3 Proposition
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So does everyone in the black family have cursed spirt manipulation?
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You’ve repeated this and another paragraph twice
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I feel like it would be fine if it’s either.
"I'm Gojo Satoru, the teacher in charge of freshmen at the school of magical techniques." - EndeR253mthCommentedAdapt.
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Both are German
[Author note- I just realised the similarities between Eren and Hitler- both were patriotic, both joined the Army as a scout, and both staged a coup against the then government, and both became leaders, both committed genocide, both died by suicide] - EndeR254mthReplied to Rizzler007Ch 1 Chapter 1: Secret Quest
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The story seems interesting however stop using ChatGPT for each sentence it takes away the excitement of reading a new sentence and instead makes it feel like reading a textbook from school. The complex words are really annoying and most of the sentences are just repetitive and saying the same thing. Make the words seem like complex and try to use somewhat common words.
Ch -1 Biography ( Read Before Reading the Fanfic ) - EndeR255mthCommented
I think you made an error here
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Kashimo
Hakari blocked it but felt electricity flow through his body and started shocking his muscles. - EndeR257mthReplied to EndeR25
From
For example; the Animal Path of the rinnegan would not summon those weird beasts from the narutoverse, rather it would work similar to curse spirit manipulation technique of the Geto clan, allowing Mc to assimilate and summon cursed spirits of specific grades at will, depending on mastery of the path. - EndeR257mthReplied to Lgknight
No, I don’t think he was form any clan.
For example; the Animal Path of the rinnegan would not summon those weird beasts from the narutoverse, rather it would work similar to curse spirit manipulation technique of the Geto clan, allowing Mc to assimilate and summon cursed spirits of specific grades at will, depending on mastery of the path. - EndeR258mthCommented
Yes
A/N: Sorry for the late update. Anyway, I'll be bringing a new ff soon. A jjk ff where the Mc holds the power of the Rinnegan as his cursed Technique...let me know of what you guys think. - EndeR258mthCommented
Probably change that into jujutsu sorcerer or users
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I feel like it would be better if you change the phrase of little bug into something else cause it feels a bit strange to say that.
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Geto was one with out those either.
Overall Level: Special Grade.