TwiceTheJester

Ah. Updated again now with correct chapter.

I’m confused. Is this a chapter from some other book?

The names changed partway through, throwing off the story and making it so I couldn’t tell what was going on or follow which character was which.

What’s going on with all the previous chapters (and this one) being only a few paragraphs long? The story just seems to be skipping all over the place.

Wonder when the next update will be. Getting put off purchasing priv in the future with how frequent updates stop partway through the month.

Errr… for some reason the last 3-4 paragraphs seem to be repeated multiple times for me. Anyone else?

Nope. All fine now! [img=recommend]

Why do the paragraphs explaning who she is, and who her father is, repeat about 6 times?

Why am I getting Hudson & Ru vibes? Eeep!

Love this chapter. Been waiting for a scene like this to happen between them for a long time, and the childishness being displayed here is perfect!