Bre_dan

If Cersei worms Joffrey out of this I’m gonna drop this book. No king is just going to drop this subject no matter what his queen says. but I have a feeling your going to. The fact that she walked into a meeting and started talking is bulshit. She has no right to even be in the meeting.

You should give the girl a bit of backbone. She just does what everyone tells her. She could have atleast tried to say something. She just stood there like a idiot and did everything her brother told her. What a loser character.

So I was right another story that follows the rest and makes the Mc a follower of dumbledore. It is boring and predictable writings. Don’t worry about anything else dumbledore will have some wise wisdom that somehow makes the Mc see enlightenment and is all of a sudden and 10 times more powerful. I thought I would finally read a bout about the blacks but he is just another dumbledore stooge

Another chapter about nothing.

Please don’t make the Mc a typical dumbledore stooge that does whatever dumbledore wants. It’s boring to read.

. Great job so far I’m enjoying the read. Quick question. Why is she weak to the heat. Isn’t she a kangaroo mink. Kangaroos do very well in the heat. They survive in the hottest parts of Australia.

Bro. Can you please stop it. You somehow think it is funny that these women always hit him and don’t respect him but it’s not. And your doing it like every chapter. If nami isn’t hitting him kuina is or taking his money of him or making him a slave or disrespecting him. You are clearly a simp that thinks this Is ok. It would be different if they showed any affection for him or even said thankyou once but they haven’t done anything but have it out for him since the start of the book.

I’m gonna say this again. You write like a virgin that has never talked to a female before. Your impression of women is terrible. Since this book started you have made all the female charters, bossy, mean, non understanding and taking advantage of the mc constantly. They add nothing to this book except to annoy him and make him there slave.

Did you just randomly make the Mc a slave as a throw away bit in a chapter. This Mc and his this simp shit is pissing me off. You write about women like you are a virgin. Maybe talk to a few women in your life before trying to write female characters again.

Does anything ever happen in this novel. I’m sick of this talking crap.