ShockTheDragon

The inspiration is quite obvious with this abiltity… hahah

I try to avoid leaving direct criticism as technically you’re writing perfectly well up to this point… but this is downright absurd. This is almost 2 full chapters of glorifying and hyped up descriptions for a fight between a second and first rank. If this is the scale you’re using NOW, the potential dullness by the end of the book is worrying.

The book doesn’t have the tragic tag…. But that doesn’t stop him 🥺

It’s “chock-full” not choke a full!! :)

What’s the release schedule!!? :) loving the book so far!

He was having to visit the doctor again for more tests and work

That *of* Finn and Althea

The loss in energy happens when the hammers break or get interrupted and he can’t “recall” the energy used to summon it. In this case he’s practically one tapping them all so is barely losing any energy every time he uses and “recalls” the energy.

I don’t understand Levi’s priorities… he should still focus on the werewolf as he’s clearly capable of killing them all… capturing the wannabe snitch is meaningless if you kill all the nightcrawlers

To make sure he can maintain an upload schedule w the risk of his health becoming worse if he continues… but I agree. This is so antagonizing 😔