Do not let the overall rating which is low fool you this would have had 5* across the board but I have come to realise this book will never be finished... which has resulted in the low rating 😭 Part of me wishes I had not started this book... if it was continued under another title please let me know 🙏

that was anticlimactic to say the least... its like they got bored and closed it up in a page...

The writing flows well... plot development is smooth and the story is surprisingly captivating enough that I binge read all available chapters without stopping... a few errors in vocabulary but that is easily overlooked with the rest of the story... a couple of continuity/timeline errors but seemingly corrected quickly and can be easily missed or forgiven... I look forward to reading more

The pace is good and build up is necessary however at times I have issues with some build up that seems pointless or wasted words as the author could've gathered everyone, described the thrones and their feelings and still had the MC appear in front of everyone to outline his plans without the bed to describe the etherealness of the vamps with their white hair

truly devastated that I've caught up and now have to wait daily for 2 chapters each day... one of the few OP character books I enjoy reading... cannot wait for what's coning [img=recommend]

seems like everyone is irked by that wasted chapter... don't blame them really as it was a pointless chapter and didn't develop the story what so ever...