so he went from looking for his girl to hiding? so far the Mc goes from driven to undecided and cowardly.

wow this was such an entertaining read then it just stopped. well I hope the author will eventually pick it back up.

sorry but with his personality he would have killed her before allowing her to leave with that info.

wow thats just pathetic, and even in such worlds if the house was left to Nathan then Leon really should not have been able to even get in. just had to do something cliche to force the story.

its been an awesome fic so far.

Ultimately it comes down to do you as the author feel there is justification and need for adding more women into the MC's love life? With his domain and skills it does leave room for additional interest as long as Olivia can accept and the dynamic does not shift too far.

Not necessarily just way too unfocused for my personal reading.

hope you heal up and use a 1/8 inch dowel rod to scratch your hand, its small 3nough to fit and strong enough to not break.

well so much for this MC and plot. started out great but this, bye and best of luck.

I enjoy they direction you have taken the plot line, keep up the amazing work!

Well by your logic then there is no way that bell, with no training could have ever beaten the minotaur or the other high level adventurers he did. so by that logic I have lost all interest in this fiction.

so the Mc is a simpleton, unless he's building something. He let's everyone just walk all over him, I never understood the fascination with simps.

wow you start to turn a good direction then bam! destroy it all with complete bs. well whatever

ok so he goes from recognizing characters and planning to gain in strength to a super retard genius with no self control. not sure how long I'll stay interested here

well such a wonderful story to be left in such a state. I do hope the author can return and finish.

from a great story to forced plot garbage. seriously whats the point of time turners when you just slap in the time police from DBZ I mean what trash and forced reset to Canon. went from a great read to completely disappointing.

I always hate when a great story is forcibly turned to garbage just to make the mc suffer or seem weak. and forced plot lines that do so are so half hearted.

I really find it poorly thought out having children do this jazz, worse is forcing canon, if you want to stick to canon so bad then don't try to op your mc at 4 and 5 years old that makes for a lame plot line.

well it seems that there's going to be a betrayal, and then a separation i really don't understand why all these push the point of torturing the mc and forcibly separating the mc and heroine. of course I could be seeing it wrong from here but that feels like this is the direction its headed.

I see no real point in jumping back n forth, so far the story was good but having the king directly ignore the kingdom spirit should have brought direct immediate retaliation. and to pay to open more chapters when they keep bouncing has lost my interest.