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That's impossible. The Shards aren't that good at predicting metaphysical abilities. Yes, with enough information they can predict magic and the like, but those two are yet to do anything in this world to give them that information.
Limitless is a spatial manipulation technique. Infinity is a skill of Limitless that endlessly divides the space between the user and their target.
Huh? Unless he has technomancy or a form of Telekinesis, the Simurgh should be capable of taking apart anything that isn't made of some super metaphysical materials.
Entities are the epitome of max intelligence and zero wisdom. A massively advanced race that has the imagination of a brick. Their sole goal is to figure out a way to avoid the eventual death of the universe. And here's the thing, they already have every tool they need to achieve that, they just don't know how to effectively accomplish it. That's not even the worst part. According to the author, an Entity had even figured it out at some point, but a bunch of other Entities ganged up on it to take the solution for themselves, only to end up completely destroying that particular Entity alongside the solution to their problem. That's how dumb those things are.
You really love this word, "sight" don't you?
Maybe you meant damage? Cause this doesn't make that much sense otherwise
advantaged -> advanced*
more strong -> stronger
Writing quality is okay at best. Sentences are short, simple, and easy to read, which is good. However, there's barely any description of anything and there's a lot of telling rather than showing.The plot is straightforward. MC has experienced no hardships or struggled to achieve anything while everything has been handed to him on a silver platter.The system that he has is almost useless. Sure, it gave him a few extra skills that made him a bit stronger, but I feel like he could've achieved all of that on his own. Honestly, it seems like its there for word padding than anything else.*Sorry for the formating, WN on mobile sucks and doesn't accept my separate paragraphs.*
If he ate a Dragon Lacrima, the he shouldn't have a Dragon form cause second generation Dragon Slayers don't have the issue of Dragonification.
How rich are they to afford to do nothing for a couple of years?
Dragon Gods are hyped up way too much and only one of them could really be considered that dangerous and that's Selene. And even she isn't an equal to Acnologia. Sure, they claim they've surpassed him, but in the other timeline from which future Rogue came from, Acnologia literally rules the world. If they were actually stronger than him, that wouldn't have happened now would it?
God>Dragon>Devil/Demon when it comes to the Slayer types of Magic. So as long as Natsu doesn't slack off, he's fire should always be stronger.
Sorry for the formating. For some reason WN refuses to separate my paragraphs on mobile.
You never slap a comma after the quotation marks, it's always inside if the verb after signifies some form of speech. Here are a few examples of how to properly write dialogue."Have a good day," said the shopkeeper."Have a good day." The shopkeeper waved goodbye."How are you doing today?" Asked the shopkeeper.
Lost or Ancient Magics are amazing modifiers, but FT is a typical shounen fantasy so you can become op even without then. Jura who uses a simple Earth Magic is a good example. The other guy from the Saints who uses Take Over is an even better example since he is among the top 3 strongest in Ishgar. They achieved their strength without even having a system. With one, they would've become the strongest, so this really isn't an excuse.
How would they know that? They aren't from the future but the past. Aqua was the doctor that helped her give birth to the kids as weird as that sounds since he literally helped himself get birthed. While Ruby is a young girl that was sick, forget with what, that adored idols above everything else, with Ai being her favorite idol.
Ehh, not necessarily. He had everything, power, fame, money, except genuine women in that other world. To him right now, this is the greatest treasure that could possibly exist, so he's pretty upset that someone tarnished something so amazing and didn't treat it right.
*turned my life from boring to interesting*
Last chapter he literally says, "I know three whole spells."