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  • procrastination04
    procrastination046mth
    Commented

    That's impossible. The Shards aren't that good at predicting metaphysical abilities. Yes, with enough information they can predict magic and the like, but those two are yet to do anything in this world to give them that information.

    Everyone on the Undersiders' side is too frightened at the moment. I don't need to know whatever they were told on the way here from Coil to understand; I, or Nyarla, must have done something crazy scary in the other timeline and maybe different possible timelines to scare Coil nearly to death in this main timeline we're in.
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    Daily Life of A Caretaker
    Anime & Comics · ImBoredSoMehl
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination046mth
    Replied to crimson_killer

    Limitless is a spatial manipulation technique. Infinity is a skill of Limitless that endlessly divides the space between the user and their target.

    This new one is from Jujutsu Kaisen. No, crazy voices, it isn't Limitless, but the Ten Shadows Technique. Using shadows as an intermediary, this technique allows the user to summon 10 different shikigami.
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    Daily Life of A Caretaker
    Anime & Comics · ImBoredSoMehl
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination046mth
    Replied to EzioAuditore_1

    Huh? Unless he has technomancy or a form of Telekinesis, the Simurgh should be capable of taking apart anything that isn't made of some super metaphysical materials.

    "Focus Linus, focus; you have three years to get this right and nine months to save Taylor's mother before the queen of escalation. Specifically, her trigger event becomes all the more possible".
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    Finding Purpose In The Multiverse: Meta Essence Quest Mode
    Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination046mth
    Commented

    Entities are the epitome of max intelligence and zero wisdom. A massively advanced race that has the imagination of a brick. Their sole goal is to figure out a way to avoid the eventual death of the universe. And here's the thing, they already have every tool they need to achieve that, they just don't know how to effectively accomplish it. That's not even the worst part. According to the author, an Entity had even figured it out at some point, but a bunch of other Entities ganged up on it to take the solution for themselves, only to end up completely destroying that particular Entity alongside the solution to their problem. That's how dumb those things are.

    In addition to the fact that this universe is being threatened by fourth-dimensional beings whose sole purpose is to collect data and discover the method to entropy by destroying civilizations.
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    Finding Purpose In The Multiverse: Meta Essence Quest Mode
    Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Commented

    You really love this word, "sight" don't you?

    "*Sigh* This Elicia was nothing but an energetic angel who tended to speak before thinking." The old man said to himself, putting down a page of Elicia's report on his desk. "She didn't have a single bad bone in her body. This was truly a horrible accident. *Sigh*"
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    Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
    Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Commented

    Maybe you meant damage? Cause this doesn't make that much sense otherwise

    [When the player uses this sword, each attack will generate 30% additional attacks.
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Commented

    advantaged -> advanced*

    I must say Kaneki is an intelligent guy. Because of him, I understand SOMEWHAT this advantaged technology still, I had a hard time knowing more.
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Commented

    more strong -> stronger

    I need to absorb the life force to become more strong.
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Posted

    Writing quality is okay at best. Sentences are short, simple, and easy to read, which is good. However, there's barely any description of anything and there's a lot of telling rather than showing.The plot is straightforward. MC has experienced no hardships or struggled to achieve anything while everything has been handed to him on a silver platter.The system that he has is almost useless. Sure, it gave him a few extra skills that made him a bit stronger, but I feel like he could've achieved all of that on his own. Honestly, it seems like its there for word padding than anything else.*Sorry for the formating, WN on mobile sucks and doesn't accept my separate paragraphs.*

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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Commented

    If he ate a Dragon Lacrima, the he shouldn't have a Dragon form cause second generation Dragon Slayers don't have the issue of Dragonification.

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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Commented

    How rich are they to afford to do nothing for a couple of years?

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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Commented

    Dragon Gods are hyped up way too much and only one of them could really be considered that dangerous and that's Selene. And even she isn't an equal to Acnologia. Sure, they claim they've surpassed him, but in the other timeline from which future Rogue came from, Acnologia literally rules the world. If they were actually stronger than him, that wouldn't have happened now would it?

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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Commented

    God>Dragon>Devil/Demon when it comes to the Slayer types of Magic. So as long as Natsu doesn't slack off, he's fire should always be stronger.

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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Replied to procrastination04

    Sorry for the formating. For some reason WN refuses to separate my paragraphs on mobile.

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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Commented

    You never slap a comma after the quotation marks, it's always inside if the verb after signifies some form of speech. Here are a few examples of how to properly write dialogue."Have a good day," said the shopkeeper."Have a good day." The shopkeeper waved goodbye."How are you doing today?" Asked the shopkeeper.

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  • procrastination04
    procrastination049mth
    Commented

    Lost or Ancient Magics are amazing modifiers, but FT is a typical shounen fantasy so you can become op even without then. Jura who uses a simple Earth Magic is a good example. The other guy from the Saints who uses Take Over is an even better example since he is among the top 3 strongest in Ishgar. They achieved their strength without even having a system. With one, they would've become the strongest, so this really isn't an excuse.

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  • procrastination04
    procrastination0410mth
    Replied to ShiroNirvana

    How would they know that? They aren't from the future but the past. Aqua was the doctor that helped her give birth to the kids as weird as that sounds since he literally helped himself get birthed. While Ruby is a young girl that was sick, forget with what, that adored idols above everything else, with Ai being her favorite idol.

    And for Ai's kids, the situation was indeed supernatural as they were actually reincarnations with memories of their previous lives intact.
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    Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination0410mth
    Replied to F_A_T_E

    Ehh, not necessarily. He had everything, power, fame, money, except genuine women in that other world. To him right now, this is the greatest treasure that could possibly exist, so he's pretty upset that someone tarnished something so amazing and didn't treat it right.

    But after his experience, he started to hate men who mistreated women more than anything, that was the only thing he hated now.
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    Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination0410mth
    Commented

    *turned my life from boring to interesting*

    They are the greatest things that made my life boring to interesting. I must thank those creators for creating this fiction for People like us.
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  • procrastination04
    procrastination0410mth
    Replied to TheEvilDragon23

    Last chapter he literally says, "I know three whole spells."

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    DXD: A Nexus Devil (DXD x Multi-Crossover)
    Anime & Comics · FiveStarTomato
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