Oh shii😂😂😂😂

Correction im the 11th😂😂😂

I’ll be your tenth review😂😂, this is honestly one of the best I’ve read in a while and I’m a heavy fan of villain novels that aren’t overpowered and have no romance as well as having a rank based structure so this is exactly what im looking for, so make this better than supreme magus( which in my opinion was pathetic once he left the academy and kept trying to find love and risking his life to help people when he could have skyrocketed to power instead, you can’t want power and love at the same time because sooner or later one will overcome the other and personally I’d rather have power than saving some women everytime she’s in trouble) but regardless amazing job on this⚔️

This is new, usually mc’s have the worst talent or heaven defying talent that causes disruption to the surroundings so having a prestigious calm A talent for a VILLAIN mc is very refreshing well done, now let’s see if he’s true villain or a hypocrite who makes himself think he’s a villain

Let’s see how long you last with this, I’ve seen many write rn novels but they usually don’t pass 70 in the end

This is literally reverend insanity😐😐😐😐😐😐

This literally could not be anymore cliche than it is rn

What’s it called

Please get rid of the kid she’s useless

Honestly after your done with this you should try making a naruto fanfic with the mc being a puppeteer like sasori but with the same personality he has currently it would honestly be unique and amazing, but regardless I love this story atm especially how he is towards other ppl and not some annoying cliche hero or some guy that has a soft heart for women or any children for that matter, and it’s even better that he doesn’t hide the fact that he’s incredibly twisted and evil unlike most villain novels that I’ve read regardless though this novel is outstanding keep up the good work

Dude your being cliche with picking up the lil girl part I can’t stand why writers love helping useless people and 9/10 it’s always little girls or some kind of female like it’s pointless helping a friend doesn’t mean helping his family tree

Love his personality but please don’t let it be a cliche where he constantly keeps the girl around and saves her that is honestly weird and annoying

I love it,I love it,I love it,I love it,I love it,I love it this is what I’v been waiting for keep going like this and I’l be willing to donate to keep you motivated never change this mc he’s freakin perfect outstanding job

I have faith in this novel it’s turning out well just don’t let it be a gender bender since he really is originally a male at heart a male that could be mistaken for a girl is cool tho but plzzzzzz don’t let this be a harem or romance in the end a evil protagonist and a love life just doesn’t match

It always ends the same way male meets cute girl says he’s only gonna “use” her but they become best friends and he protects her all the time your a animal for gods sake forget about her pretend like you didn’t see anything Ur supposed to be eating them not becoming buddy-buddy with them I CANT STAND CLICHES

Forget having wives there just for breeding then you can throw them away the hanma clan is STRICTLY ONLY men women have mo rights in the matter

Kira

Glad you chose sons instead of daughters men are more physically developed and less about killing

This novel doesnt seem bad just dont put him in anbu its honestly cliche and annoying

Why is noah so soft its honestly pathetic